You never really did care much for bugs. So it'd figure that after being magically displaced into pastel pony world, you get kidnapped by pony-sized bugs.
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So cute. So badass.
Pupa is a cutie alright. It's good that she knows when to be vicious and when to be loving.
I hope she still loves her father after all this...
I'm down for a momlestia
I love that even Pupa approves of AP (well her cocoon anyway).
Man, I hope this works out for all parties.
Love you Pupa!
D'aww
Pubs is gonna be the death of chysalis
Well, Queen Ap, Queen Chryssie, and King Thorax in the dungeons.
♫And Anon's fucked all the Royals (royals)
Maybe only metaphorically
The kind of man that he must be
Is a different kind of breed♫
♫ And he can be the Hive's ruler (ruler)
You can call him King Dee
And baby he'll rule (he'll rule, he'll rule, he'll rule)
Living out his fantasies ♫
Love all of this chapter. Love Pupa, and hail the, Anon Generation!
Sorry, Hotdog!
This was an unexpectedly heartwarming chapter.
Adorabugs!
Daawww . . .
Who's a cute little megalomaniac, who's a cute little megalomaniac?
You are! Yes, you are!
AHH, STOP BITING MY NOSE!
Hnngh... too damn adorable. Pupa best babby-bug.
God that's cute
Let’s hope the princess Pupa isn’t as the depraved asked her mother and father cuz who knows mybe she might think her dad might be the perfect mate He’s got everything at changing wants in one
I shall do something horrendous, I shall ship hot dog and pupa!
"...and you'd be damned if you didn't love them back."
Uh oh, in before she turns into one of those mooses...? Meese? Changelings. That'd make for quite a twist.
and then she evolved from a perfected changeling into colored changeling becoming even more powerfull
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This guy gets it!
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You couldn't have been more of a pretentious shriveled cunt if you had tried.
Oh god, I love it
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You have declared war on the AnonxChitin army!
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I am not the author but I also am not one of whatever "peanut gallery" you see everyone else as, being a pretty successful author on this site as well.
The pacing has been pretty decent. Primarily because NP has introduced multiple characters and balanced them quite well. Ponies and Changelings have been introduced before Ap's cocoon. They have come and gone, all being important to the plot, giving us plenty of red-herrings, funny moments, character growth moments as well as being great to read about without being overwhelming.
NP has successfully subverted expectations. The story would normally go with Ap being fed love, changing into a cocoon and then kicking Chryssi to the curb because Chryssi is evil.
NP has shown that every main character is fleshed out and is being changed by the events taking place. We love AP, but we also know Anon is subtely changing Chryssi to where we don't know if we need her gone. We also don't know anymore if Ap can beat Chryssi, because of the conflict from a plot point set up chapters ago came back and showed how powerful Chrysalis has become.
In this one we know that all of Anon's brood is actually becoming very intelligent, very quickly. That's important and because NP has established that they fully understand the rules of Chekhov's Gun, it is going to be important in ways we don't know yet.
And that is particularly interesting.
Of course if you are only here for Ap becoming queen and killing Chrysalis I can see why you would be annoyed.
But hey, I'm apparently a peanut. You also have said you wouldn't reply to this, so don't worry. I'm not expecting one. I wouldn't want to make a liar out of you right?
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Well, aren't WE arrogant?
I did not expect a Pupa chapter but oh my god I adore her even more now.
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It's like he wanted the result he expected out of the story rather than an actual story, If all stories were like that they would be bland indeed.
9270189 Get dunked on shit bird.
Wait did you say Pupa LOVES them???
And last chapter, it is said changelings that love others become the beetle changelings like Thorax...
IS PUPA GONNA BE RAINBOW MOOSE BEETLE CHANGELING???
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This comment took a fat L
Great change of pace for this chapter, even though Pupa mentions almost everything it seems to just be put on hold as the adorable princess badass to be. Great work ^^
Alright got a sword and sheild with a magic feild.
Hmm.... now which banner do I.. choose...
*50(becuse anon is probably shipped with this many things) banners are scattered about*
This was cute as fuuuuck, nicely done!
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you be take that back RIGHT now
Poor Hot Dog.
Pupa is like that popular kid in school
Pupa is a cute little monster, ain't she?
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Shiny things provide much amusement.
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Honest to god, I kind of understand where you're coming from. There hasn't been a whole lot of important plot points in a bit, but the author is cranking out chapter after chapter. He's developing pre-existing characters, solving plot holes, giving insight to Chrysalis' relationship, etc. Yes I am a bit on the whole "please get Ap out" boat, but I won't condemn the story because of it.
And this is kind of a personal point but, why are you talking like someone that just read a thesaurus and really wanted to show off what you've learned? Not a whole lot of people talk like that, and it just oozes pretension. And lastly, don't be a dick to others reading the story. You're asking for trouble doing something like that.
I know you're not going to look at this because you knew for a fact you'd be flogged by everyone, but food for thought. Hopefully you stick around or at the very least, be constructive in your criticism.
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So you down voted for a down vote? Did you read the story?
Every chapter I read about this feels like a tease, I keep expecting a payoff and only occasionally does the gun fire before a new gun gets set up. I'm not saying that's a bad thing, but it feels like absolute agony by the end of the chapter and I keep expecting it to finally turn into Ap coming out of the cocoon because that's what I'm most excited for, but Pupa is adorable!
Heh, the children know! But... What will they decide?
Hail pupa, queen of the playground
Ah, new perspectives - wonderful!
I hate that i got baited for like the 4th time but i loved the chapter regardless
Definitely a unique perspective to explore. I like this little grub.
This is going to be a interessting generation indeed...
I feel sorry for Hotdog...