You never really did care much for bugs. So it'd figure that after being magically displaced into pastel pony world, you get kidnapped by pony-sized bugs.
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Wow.... Wow... Just wow...
Honorable last words. I salute you Anon.
Oh, sweet Hell that went south and then went into the earth's core so quick. Gravity took this shit deep.
It's 6 am! I stayed up till 6 am waiting on this chapter! And it was worth it!
Loving the song Anon.
huh, that happened
I'm not sure if I should worship you or throat punch you for that
....That pun was bad and I love it.
well, rip AnonxAnon’s hand?
i hate you for leaving me on a cliffhanger. Raw, unbridled hate.
...
please more soon don't make me wait please
No words can describe how im feeling about this chapter
I mean, pretty baller to go out quoting a bon jovi song lol
Fight scenes ain't to rough, you just need to keep the pace up. Short and choppy sentences go a lot longer to keeping the reader tense and on the edge of their seat than overlong descriptions. Still, dis gud, u dun well
Ah, fucking Anon... Always gotta crack some joke at any time :D
If Anon were to die it might just drive Chrysalis over the edge. If she isn't knocked unconscious ASAP, Ap'll be bearing the brunt of the burning rage of a mad, grief-stricken immortal with the power to reduce entire continents to smoldering craters and a bloody vendetta against everything non-Changeling. That is, unless her fury has by some miracle been tempered fully by what has happened to her love.
my heart
My mans went out like a G! You will be remebered.
Hmm... I was not expecting that.
Let's see how this develops.
Ever since i was little i wanted my last words to be 'Screw you guys, im goin to heaven.'
Still loving the story. I appreciate the music reference. This is so good, I don't even mind the cliffhanger.
Thank you for posting.
..... Why DO I FEEL SO BAD FOR ANON!?! He’s ajerk! Darn you for writing him in a good light! Darn you! Darn you! Chrysalis you messed up bad. To be fair it was Anon’s own fault the big dumbass he is. Though I kinda was hoping Vespa would be the one to impale him from behind.
Fuck yeah my dude, I love this story.
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I've never seen someone kill both sides of a ship with one death, before.
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"I bucked up didn't I"
No chain of comments reciting the lyrics of that song. How disappointing.
Anyway, if they are fast and careful he could live.
wow awesome! keep up the awesome work!
I was fully expecting the Pokemon movie scenario
http://c12.incisozluk.com.tr/res/incisozluk//11501/2/1195782_o99ca.jpg
You put that Anon back where he belongs, safe and sound, or so help me!
Jesus Christ, this packs way more of a punch than I thought it would.
PFFFFFFT
You little shit
Man, I as looking forward to the use of "sex whenever I want"
Even to the end, Anon memes... I've never been more proud of a man in my life, until now.
Welp, that was a nice fuckup. Though at least it saved Ap from being curbstomped for her heinous betrayal.
Or not, depending on whether this shocks Chryssie so much she stops the fight or she channels her love, her anger and all of her sorrow to pulverise the traitorous upstart.
This chapter was hole-hearted.
Your ending words make me mad cause I laughed for like 5 minutes. And the last party of the chapter.... I was just HEARING the beat start to kick off
If the next chapter isn't named "Bad Medicine", you've missed a golden opportunity.
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It wasn't that Extreme.
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Last I checked, Queen Apocrita wasn't the one who fucked up so badly she impaled her lover on her... well, she doesn't have a horn anymore, but still. She's not the one who seriously injured King Anon.
You glorious fucking bastard, I'm dying from that ending
*slow claps* good show jolly good show my boy
Damn. The ultimate sacrifice.
I said feels where inbound. Called it! Sorry Anon!
All hail queen puba
Fing perfect I don't wanna wait a day! Gah fing cliffhanger!!
Now that was a chapter to die for.
wow this chapter was definitely a heart stopper
I've heard about killing two birds with one stone but in this case it's a stabbing.
anon will fuck death into reviving him.
How exactly did chrysalis end up stabbing Anon, I’m confused
I love how half these comments are fucking puns.
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Would anyone be surprised?
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he fell on her horn, she tried to catch him but she was blinded by ap's scales.