You never really did care much for bugs. So it'd figure that after being magically displaced into pastel pony world, you get kidnapped by pony-sized bugs.
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That political bit ruined my life. I’m gonna kill myself.
Great chapter though!
Deleting comments is usually a good way to start stuff, I honestly just ignore it and not enable them, let them burn out.
Aside from that, awesome chapter well done dude, hehe.
This was excellent!!
THe title completely threw me off!!! I loved this!!
And now Chrysalis will refuse to surrender Anon without war. If her bugs complain she'll just let Anon ruin them too, so they agree with her.
And then he'll tell Luna what happened, do her in dreams and proceed to declare said war
Yay! true love at its finest!
Claps
Yeeeeesssssssss! So good! And the human versus stallion rutting stamina was just perfect! Chrysi is going to end up a drooling, sloppy mess and it's wonderful! Now to see what Anon's other commands will be... I have good feelings about the chances of Peace between Pony and Changing.
After he leaves I dont think poor chrissi would ever be able to enjoy sex again
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Oh I think he will be taking her with him.
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Im hopeful for that. I mean if i had a kinky sex crazed bug monster that could turn into anyone I wanted and provide me with my wildest fantasies id like the to stick around. Hell at that point we'd be joined at the hips
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Saaame here. After all, if you can provide love and sex, you'd get a devoted mate for the rest of your days. If not longer(Assuming Chrysalis might do some sort of changeling goo thing to increase Anon's lifespan). Chrysalis is a broken, evil, gorgeous queen. She needs true love in her life and a heal to her wounded existence so she can become something similar to Good-Sombra-verse Chrysalis. The Paragon of Love. And if he can convince her to share her love back with him... she might even transform...
Happy Chryssie, good Chryssie.
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Lol sorry typo Anon is who i meant
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Possibly but honestly I prefer evil Chysalis something about the bad girls just tickles me in the right ways.
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I can agree there. Though Anon reforming Chryssi with his dick makes me smirk.
I wonder what will happen now? Or if Chryssie is gonna keep him as his own weird personal slave thing.
Stop getting ideas from me, you filthy cheater :)
Nice chapter title. Really described the scene well.
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Oi vey, now they really will make a giant statue of Mt.Vesuvius, er, Vlad, I mean Ego... whatever he's calling it that day.
There is a very strong part of me that wants this to be Chrysalis having a dream segment. But I very highly doubt it. Cause this makes anon seem kinda dumb. Yes he is sex crazed, yes hes an asshole, yes he isn't the brightest bulb out there. But I didn't think him an idiot until now. Hopefully you can have it so anon redeems the respect he lost, as now its mostly gone. Granted there wasn't much to begin with, but yeah. Don't get me wrong the sex was written well enough, I just wish you did something else with the command as this feels a bit of a let down to me. Granted I don't see to many others complaining, so I'm probably in the minority.
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Yeah that is a funny thing. I can just see anon shouting "THE POWER OF VLAD CUM-PELLS YOU!"
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But I am working. I'm doing... Research... yes, research into potential allies for my master... Yes, that's what I'm doing.
Your right the chapter was boring I should of skipped it
Kappa
Lewd but I approve. (Lewd stuff is my jam)
Oh Chrysalis you minx. Sex gon be runed for ya.
See I'm just waiting for him to go back to AP and she gets a nice wiff of that musk and loses it. Saying that anon is hers alone and shit
About time we got to this point! Great job! Sex and humor is so my kink!
Well, time to get back to reading Anon fuck some good into Chrysalis!
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'Points to a sign that says No Refunds '
The Fuckening
What did I just read
no Ap? dissapointing, try again
I'll read your next chapter tomorrow
you know... for academic purposes
God fucking DAMNIT! I didn’t see this coming. But I love it.
needed*
Well fuck my taint, grundle and fleshy fun-bridge, I was not expecting. Good shit, man!
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How long is the story going to be I'm just asking
Oof, I knew this was coming and so did I after reading it. Good shit, Good shit. I look forward to more smut in the future, along with the obvious hijinks, of course.
All I can see is a picture of Vlad the Impaler standing on the side of Mt. Vesuvius holding the Changeling flag with the caption, "Accurate depiction of the Great Ego Revolution."
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I'm actually disappointed your comment got down voted so much, cause you're right. Deleting comments like that would be feeding into whatever hate speech someone would have to share. Given I'd still do it if I felt it was truly looking to offend anyone, but lets be honest, this story is all about offending sensibilities.
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Honestly, no clue. I do have an actual plot and end goal in mind, but just as Anon is, my thought process with what to show and what I want in this is sort of a random affair. It's not going to be an insanely long story, but I'd be lying if I said was certain about it being even halfway done at this point or not.
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This. Please, give me this. Artwork, somebody, I love it. Nobody would understand it besides those that read this story, but I fucking love that idea. Given I still have more penis joke names in store, so it may need more time for a completed picture.
Damn, that's some hot stuff you got there. Really enjoyed it. Only issue for me is that it wasn't followed up by the continuation scene of Anon rutting Chrysalis into the ground until she's absolutely senseless, leaving her a drooling mess on the floor as he walked out, changelings coming in and wondering wtf just happened.
But seriously, good stuff. Looking forward to more. You may not be used to writing sex scenes yet, but you have the right inclination. Keep going. You're doing well.
Sooo.... next chap is a quick trip to canterlot to ask about lust overdose in changelings? Chitin only knows so much.... so..... and if the queen is a drooling mess on the floor.....? Just a half blind guess.
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Goddamn, eight downvotes, that's a new record. But aye, it doesn't matter, guess I made some people salty, not a first for me. And you're the author my friend, it's honestly up to you on what you do, because in this comment section, you're the one who decides what stays and what goes.
Again, aside from that, amazing chapter and I am eager for more! offend all of the sensibilities!
No way in the hell that I gonna skip this!! It been a long time I wait for this to happen!! I demand more of Vlad The Impeler to be on use. Fuck that bug on her own throne, Anon!! Use your Ego to corrupt that bug queen and rule the hive!!!
When next AWESOME update!?
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Considering the trend, likely today unless he needs to rest his funny bones and tired fingers. Honestly the rate at which he chugs this story out is incredibly impressive and happily received.
Huh.I didnt actually thought this would actually happen for some reason.That the fic wouldnt go into clop.Im allright with it,enjoyed it.Love the fic.Write more :D
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Little ball of chitin
Kinky. And fun.
Ooooh, vagootacles. :B
You skipped past the best part, the part where he actually puts her into a pleasure coma. Gotta go til she at least has some heart pupils!
That aside, there are some interesting technicallities with an ongoing command where she has to let him fuck her whenever he wants.
The Crystal Empire should build a wall to prevent Changelings from getting in.
Welp, after this, Chryssi might be willing to literally go to war in Helen of Try style to keep Anon all to herself purely for sexual reasons, now.
This chapter was very boring. I'm so happy I skipped it all just to write this comment
10/10 would skip again.
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I... huh. I have no idea where this is going.
Holy shit
I can't believe it finally happened. Show's over, guys. We can go home. Anon fucked the bug.
*Dr. strange comes in* Boi, stop stealing my lines, you trash can!