Provoking Prankster

Dash has been pranking her friends......AGAIN! But some of them may have gone a bit too far......

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ShadowXper

ShadowXper #1 · Sep 3rd, 2018 · · ·

Bonus chapter on what happens next? I’m also surprised spike didn’t get pranked

RebelNarrator45

RebelNarrator45 #2 · Sep 3rd, 2018 · · ·

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Well.....I had intended this to be just a one shot type thing.......but after the amount of fun I had writing it, I might consider a prolouge type chapter......

Not making any promises.........

Justin Daniels

Justin Daniels #3 · Sep 4th, 2018 · · ·

I enjoyed this quite a lot! Nicely done, Rainbowfan!

If I may, though, I mean absolutely no disrespect, but I've found a few minor typos involving the word "their". If you'll hit CTRL + F and type in, without the quotes, "thier", you should come across four of them. Not really a big deal, but thought you should know, as I've actually had similar typos like that quite often in the past, and still find myself running into them while proofreading.

Anyways, I like this! Almost felt like a legit episode, and was resolved in a way similar to how I'd expect it to be done in the show. Can't say the same for everyone else's stories, by any means! And quite often, not even my own!