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This story is a sequel to New Shopping, Old Rival
Trixie loves Adagio, and Adagio loves her too. And Trixie knows Adagio can be quite the tease, but the minute Trixie starts checking her girlfriend out, a recollection and bad memory from the past returns...
Another one-shot in the lives of Dork Trixie and Friendly Adagio!
Rated T for suggestive moments and discussion. No actual sex.
Inspired by Nico-Stone Rupan's, A Sour Sweet Gesture.
Featured! Whoo-hoo! Thank you guys! 
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Well now, now we know why Trixie sometimes struggles with Adagio's flirting.
Glad my stories still inspire you. Naughty stuff
Just one thing: Trixie's incident is first said to have happened in "7th grade" but then its mentioned that it was "freshman year". Probably should either change it to "9th grade" or delete the other line, depending on what your preferred timeline is.
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Oh. Oops
Poor Trixie, I hate it when bullies do something so cruel to make others feel worthless!
Thank goodness that Adagio is there to support her girlfriend!
Full transparency, I read this in just a few minutes because of my schedule, but I decided to leave a short comment anyway. I know my writing doesn't get noticed much, but if I expect attention, I think I should give it too.
I don't pay mind to stories with that coveted raunchiness in its title, but it's been a long time since that "don't judge a zebra by its stripes" episode of MLP, so bite me. I gave this one a look simply because it is something new you're trying, and I applaud leaving one's comfort zone. From what I can tell, I like that physical lust is not the focus, as can be the case when stories like this are kept short to appeal to sudden natural urges (ew), but rather an exploration of emotional interaction.
So, all I can say is to keep it up, and if you feel like you need any tips on how to write, feel free to message me. I have three or so years of literature studies so I'd like to think I'm qualified to give some pointers.
This is a cute little story. I'll be honest; Trixie+Adagio is not something I thought about shipping, but you made it work.
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Thanks!
Aww, poor Trixie. I felt so bad for her reading about her past in this story...
Good thing she had Adagio there for her.
All in all, this was a really good story.
Nice work!
This is such a cute pairing, are you gonna write more on this pair?
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Mmmhmm. Heck, check out the two stories before it, got some more with them.
But yes, I do intend on writing a lot more with them
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I've read the 2 that you mentioned. Both characters are very cute together. Btw does shattered rainbow rock show how the 2 got together?
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Well, the full A Shattered Rainbow Rock does not show them getting together in that sense.
But;
1. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/405328/3/aftermath-of-the-shattered-rainbow-rock/a-teasing-trick
2. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/405328/5/aftermath-of-the-shattered-rainbow-rock/an-adagio-in-theater
These two particular shorts show them getting together.
Is this story in any way related to MythrilMoth's A Flash of Regret?
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Nope.
I have reviewed this here.
Aww this was romantic and very steamy. Very fitting for Adagio
Man, I wish that was the lesson the media and schools would teach us: yeah you shouldn't stare at someone, but doing so doesn't automatically make you a pervert or a voyeur, because all of us have felt this way at one time.
I never expected a raunchy one-shot to be so deep, but you are a damn good writer.
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heh, thanks
This story and series of stories are adorable.
What happened to the prequel to this fic, I keep getting 404 messages?
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I’m sorry about that; I’ll try to fix that later, but essentially the story I made prior to this I really didn’t do super with, so I wasn’t sure if I should keep it around.