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Michael Hudson


Original Works. It was a good run.

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"As Ulfer begins his journey, an intense heatwave has rendered all but the lightest armor unbearable to wear for all. Only the lightest of fabrics allow one to function in the heat. (Armor Encumbrance 1 or lower, or 50% fatigue)"

As Ulfer begins to prepare for his journey a traveling pleasure wagon passes through town. As it passes by one of the maidens inside begs for his help saying they have kidnapped her.

Okay, this looks like it;'s gonna be fun. :D Hmm...

Here's a suggestion:

1. Ulfer needs help from a local bard to soothe some savage beasts.

How's that?

Heh, very nice! Not what I was imagining for the scenario I suggested, but still a good one. Now let's see...

"As the heat lessens, Ulfar faces the world around him...only to be confronted and taken hostage by a gang of wicked vixens who seek to tempt him from the path of virtue that is the Paladin's way."

Excellent, excellent. :D


9041865
I second this one. :D

So, scenarios that we write will be written by Shining, which will cause a similar event to happen to him in "real life"?

Just trying to understand the premis of this Fic.

"Ulfer is not the only one suffering from the unnatural heat. The pond close by has nearly dried up, leaving the local seapony priestess desperate for a hero to find the source and make things right."

Fetish: begging, D/S

9041960 Yep! Or similarly, if something is happening to his world, or even just a town, at large, it can end up affecting the world too.

Ulfer plays hero and causes problems more than he realized in Shining's Campaign Book.

9042047 That unfortunately is too vague to count. I'm sorry.

"The lasting heat forces Ulfer to go to the blacksmith for a new, lighter armor to avoid suffering a heat stroke.

The blacksmith is more than willing to help him, and even share her secrets of heat resistance with him (she works with high temperatues all the time after all), if he doesn't mind keeping her company."

Would that be ok?

Sadly gonna be delayed in reading this so I'll miss the committing I think, I hope things go well!

9042648 Yes! Probably morphed more to a general armor statement (though I do actually appreciate you all trying to make a through line for these things) but that definitely works for a comment for this!

9042662
Heh, nailed it in one :pinkiehappy:

Out of curiosity, will there be explicit mature content, or just heavy teasing like in the second chapter?

9042669 The current plan I have for it is explicit sexual material. This is a lot lighter/sexier than most of my comment driven stories, so it's not going to have NEARLY as much cock teasing as others I've done have had.

Alright got to read this, and its time for a bit of fun, and I hope this can be used at some point if not soon! :pinkiehappy:

"Ulfar, feeling far from himself, with the help of his companions sought a task to help rebuild lost momentum! Things go well, so well as the employer, a local "Alchemist" and major noble, to celebrate said 'alchemist' has them and himself stay within one of his estates and have a minor celebration with those involved. Unannounced to the would-be Alchemist and his newly minted 'friends', would be subject to a rather foul jest. As a family member close to the host spikes the drinks served with the Alchemist's own ingredients, causing a wild side of the heroes (and host) to come out, (Roll severity, resists, of nature(wilds), and mental protections guard from physical and mental effects accordingly mundane guards do not help) (effect of transformative based on amount taken.)
Notes
The drinks would be spiked with potions made of Wild's Water (treated water from certain magic pools within the Everfree) and Poison Joke Extract and finished with Wolves hair.
The effects of the said potion were originally made to prank others, while the 'heroes' were uninformed of this find out the little alcohol added seemed to make the effect more wild and direct.
The sibling wasn't aware the effect alcohol would have with the potion and remained to see the effects.
End

I may have gone a bit overboard, but plenty excited, besides gotta see how much I can push and how little I can push. :twilightblush:

9042662
Would you prefer ideas going into greater detail, or short posts like most have been so far?

9043051 I am inclined to say short, merely because this is supposed to cause one scene or one major change, and the more extreme you make your comment A) the note constricted I become with working with it, and B) the more may need to be chopped down in order for it to work with the format. Sorry.

If you can manage a more in depth pussy though that is still essentially one concept though, please leave it then! I don't want to discourage any great ideas from coming out by arbitrary rules.

A something, (maybe a ring) any stallion that touch it becomes a mare with C-cups,
if you are already a mare, you get DD-cups
Maybe that is jest a dream

An evil which is stelling kids' uf, making them go from kids to as old as his mom

one of his Shy Earht-pony-Warrior friend becomes a horny Unicorn-Wizard

they drink a drink that makes stallion hard for more then 4 hours, and mares uncontrollably wet untell they cum 3 times

9042946 Meant to respond to this sooner: I do not want to be against detailed posts. Even yours, with some errors making it a little harder to read, is fun... But it's too large. If there was already an event to have happen, such as a dance I had set up to have happen soon, or a convention Shining was going to, that would help. In general though, it's asking for too many wishes. These are scenes meant to trigger, for the most part, one wish to either recreate the scene, or have an effect on the world happen to Equestria. This is a bit too much for that unfortunately as it requires too many pieces to be pushed into position and the like.

If that makes sense, which I understand if it doesn't.

It's also admittedly harder for me to work with when you have the level of detail you do.

9045429
No, I got you, no worries, I kinda figured it was too long, I was overexcited. I often have to pull myself back, but as I said, I was kinda pushing the note so I let myself go. Don't worry I understand, I saw another shot, so I'll wait till the next chapter to give out another shot. :twilightsmile:

Could you put Tigress from King cu panda in it?? We were introduced to anthro cats in the movie.

9045523 Huh. Admittedly, my first reaction is to make anyone who comes in pony, but I hadn't considered leaving them as their regular anthro forms for other anthro characters.

Also, Tigress, I like her, so I'll try to keep her in mind.

"Ulfar undergoes a quest to retrieve an artifact of great importance, only to be cornered by a tribe of amazons. While he can engage in battle in an attempt to complete his mission, attempts at diplomacy could ease his mission and bring great rewards, especially as their leader - One Who Spits Fire - is appreciative of his strength of body and character."

"Ulfer must search for an answer to an obstacle in his quest, visiting a place of knowledge for a spell or a piece of wisdom that may guide him in the right direction.

Once in there, he meets a mare in search of her own answer, a way to sate the carnal hunger a botched potion has left her with. They may help each other to find the answers they seek."

Ulfer after many strange events goes with his bardic friend for advice on where to go next, and end up meeting an enchanting and power sorceress in the tavern who takes an interest in adding the two adventurers to her conquest, will they manage to resist? :pinkiegasp:

Hope this works better. I hope you have good luck with your schooling!
Gentle breeze guide your way, and a warm smile welcome you home. :twilightsmile:

(I really wanna call our paladin Ulfar instead of Ulfer, guess its like calling Shining Armor Shining Armour. :rainbowhuh: )

9046793 It's not my schooling, it's Shining's. The note is about in story it's Sunday on this last chapter, not in real life. :P

Anyways, that does work much better!

Huh. Was this a prompt from the patreon?

9058717 No, I don't post my fanfiction stuff on Patreon unfortunately, or else I would have a lot more posts on there. It was inspired by this comment.

9046986
Looking back at my post I can't help but slap myself for the number of grammar mistakes I made and word mistakes, and... everything.

Anyway because this is one of those where I can likely shoot ideas off, and you can ignore or play with at your leisure (or come back) I'll throw another one to your feet to see if you can have fun with it at some point. (I'll limit myself to one per chapter, otherwise I think I may actually annoy you! :rainbowderp: )

"Ulfer finds himself in a peculiar situation when his comrades mistakenly find themselves in a den of a vampiric coven, somehow unnoticed entering they barely escape without angering the vampires. However, a young vampiress notices them and instead of alerting takes to stalking the paladin, to try and turn him to her coven."
(I was going to say Succubi, but that's a cheerleader thing, actors are more vampiric haha! :rainbowlaugh: sorry had to share my personal philosophy.)

9059448 That's fine, and while I like the situations, if you want to make sure I go for certain characters, don't be afraid to clarify or say, even if it's in a small bit of clarification after the main D&D concept bit.

9059533
I'll keep in mind that, I will!

9059554 Also, I will say that while Vampires being actors isn't impossible, it does still speak more cheerleader or goth to me. :rainbowwild:

9059578
Sure sure sure, everyones a critic. . . :trixieshiftright:

That was definitely a lot of fun.
Now, let's see...ah!
"The Priestess/Monk's tutelage will prove most helpful to Ulfar, granting him new insight into the secrets of the world and enhanced perception to see what those around him keep hidden, especially those things they might use to try and harm him."

God DAMN that was good. :D

"Suddenly, a fiery demon in the guise of a young mare blocked Ulfer's path! Was she the source behind the merciless heat? Either way, Ulfer would have to bear the demon's burning wrath until he could find an opening for a counterattack!"

(Angry sex with Sunset Shimmer)

9064379
I second this. Even more so if her role in the campaign is as a recurring villain.

9098696 Yes. The author writing anything has been a little more troublesome.

9098737
Ah, ok. If you need help, let me know.

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