After the Wedding, Vinyl is greeted by Princess Celestia, who offers a strange opportunity: to play an organ over one thousand years old. Vinyl, a seasoned pianist raised to be a noble, cannot resist, and with the support of her best friend, Rarity, she is unstoppable. However, this organ has a dark secret, one Celestia thought would never resurface. It is a shame she was wrong.
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Well, I was finally convinced to post this. It's a very experimental piece. I've tried a new take on Vinyl, while obviously in odd tensing and first person. Also, I'm not sure I used the color effectively, but it too was experimental. The idea was pretty hard to execute as well, and I'm not sure if I like the outcome or not. The 'ship' was fun, though, even if was just a tiny fling. I wanted to try and strengthen the emotional ties between them, but again, not sure what I think of it.
As well, I'm well aware of the areas that are probably rushed, but I attribute (blame) it to the tense.
For some reason, I listened to Chariots of Fire theme song while reading this. :P lol
Darling, if you were trying for a frighting and dark story, you succeeded; marvelously. Vinyl's descent into madness was both saddening and enthralling. You have a wonderful talent, I hope this gets featured so more people will see it
Ciao darling
Holy shit; just, wow.
Do you mind if i read this? I just got back home to my recording stuff.
That was...; man, if you ever get the opportunity to write for a living. Do it.
Im stunned.
998377 Sure, I'd love it if you made a reading of it
Glad to hear you liked it, it was quite the challenge to write.
Damn, I need to catch up on all of my shorter stories so as I can read the ones of yours that I still haven't.
998193 Thank you. I doubt this'll get featured
Some people seem to be abrasive towards Vinyl's end. Might I ask if this seemed rushed to you at all? Trying to buff out pacing and such 
1005540
seems fine to me. thumb-up
1005540 Dear, this story didn't seemed rushed at all. The pacing, to me at least, was perfect. It was slow enough that the story was given enough explanation that it didn't seem random. The best part, in comparison to other stories, is that the story was quick enough to keep me hooked. Sometimes when people worry about the pacing, they slow it down to the point that the story feels dragged out. Yours didn't feel stretched at all. You wrote a wonderful story
Ciao darling
This was amazing, definitely a new and different take on Vinyl, (which is not a bad thing to be sure) but I really liked the concept behind it, not to mention the execution of it. Poor Vinyl...
I liked it. It has some... eerie and beauty that make a good story. Kinda reminds me of Lovecraft, of autumn, that sort of thing. It's simply good and pleasant to rad, at least for me it was.
As someone who also plays the organ on occasion, I found this relevant and surprisingly chilling.
wow,just wow. that was amazing in a edgar-allen-poe-way with a side of slow decent into madnesss. you get a high-five and a mustashe
! good show, jolly good show!
HOLY BALLS BATMAN.
that really is an awesome take on vinyl
epic story with some awesome history to it
Really struggled with the ending
so wished for everything to get better and for it all to be fine and dandy with a big ol' Deus ex Machina
but no, it ended and I nearly cried
EPIC.