The time of the digital heroes have long since passed, and humans and Digimon lived in harmony, but just because the Earth is fine with them, doesn't mean that all is well in the Digital World. First contact has been made with a new world, a world whose creators are not human at all, but colorful, peaceful ponies.
Now the digital forces of evil have come to this peaceful place, trying to do here, what they could not on earth. It’s up to a new team of digital heroes to save eques
And end the threat of the seven demon lords and their master. Will the legacy live on in these ponies? Find out in Digimon Tamers: Despairing Hope.
Chapters (5)
Titles are supposed to be capitalised. You were supposed to learn that before you reached the age of nine.
8949475
Hello, oh flawless being, what mistakes have you not made recently? aside from the repetitive hating on authors here when you have not written shit in fear of karmic retribution for your likely less than remedial writing ability?
8949523
Way to go and if you want to know, I helped with the making of this fan fiction.
8949530
oh you write with him too? Nice~
8949533
Thanks, I am a fan of Digimon too.
8949523
I'll give your response the respect it's due when you remember that the first word in a sentence is supposed to be capitalised. So with that being said:
8949538
oh yes, very true. does this annoy you? i would say i am sorry. but oh, wait...i am not! imagine that, what a shocker, i feel no pity for you, a pitiful little man with zero contribution to this fandom aside from bashing others and making the community more toxic.
8949538
i legitimately did the lack of capitalization on purpose to goad you on into showing how immature you are, and you took the bait spectacularly.
8949544
Coming from a pitiful man with the grammar of a second grader...I'm so hurt. However will I recover from your semi-coherent, poorly written diatribe?
8949538
Let me tell you something that you might not like. Stop being a jerk and give constructive criticism for once in your life.
P.S. Get a life outside of your computer.
8949547 At least I AM writing, what do you do? aside from bash others for fun?
8949548
Reminding someone of the English lessons they learned shortly after most learn to ride a bike isn't "constructive". Or would it be more accurate to say it was done in a way that hurt your delicate fee-fees?
8949551
>aT LEasT i'M wrItinG
Things that would get failed any later than the fourth grade? Next you'll say that you were only pretending to be stupi...wait.
8949553
It's very obvious, you have no life outside of hurling insults to the wind. What I am say is that you have no meaningful purpose you cretinous fool.
8949475
Also, you misspelled Capitalized, you pitiful excrement eating bastard of a plebeian masses rejected orgy baby
8949559
There is making food that brings back repeat customers, for which I get paid well. Course, hurting the feelings of delicate manchildren is something I don't pass up when the opportunity presents itself.
8949555
wow, you're soo funny, next you'll tell me you actually have friends? No one likes to be talked to like you talk to, well, everyone. I have yet to see you say one thing that is nice in the entire time I have seen you.
8949562
Depends on which regional form of English one uses. Congratulations on those big words (for you). How many do you actually understand? A third maybe?
8949563
The only manchild here is you. And all you are doing is wasting everyone's time. So goodbye and so long and farewell. Or is that outside of your kindergarten level vocabulary?
8949563
They must come back for the crack you salt their food with
8949566
more than you, caveman, what, you still rutting holes in the dirt?
8949565
Coming from a manchild, your position on that is understandable. Might I recommend you leave the basement once in a while and see for yourself? It's rather fulfilling.
8949567
8949571
I probably walk more in a week than you have in years. I play soccer, and hike in the woods to clear my head after work
8949568
See, if you made your own food instead of asking your parents for those chicken tendies, you'd (hopefully) know drugs make for very poor additions to a prepared dish.
8949576
I cook better than you, that's for sure. People like you make chef's cry, cause they know it's pointless as long as people just use the microwave meals to serve their customers and sprinkle some addictive shit on it to make them come back
8949571
The truth hurts, doesn't it?
8949582
Your lack of culinary knowledge is as surprising as it is lacking. Ask your mother about addictive additives in food when she brings your hot pockets to the basement.
8949584
8949593
One thing I may have forgotten to mention, good sir, is that I have no basement, and i live on my own. Unlike you, who, as this is all something you came up with, most likely do, in fact live in your mothers basement
8949601
>nO u
Oh boy, did that show me.
8949593
My advice for you, learn from this experience and be a better person.
8949604
Show you what? that your IQ is equal to that of a goldfish? You tried the copying of what I say as something poorly typed and far less mature already. Running out of material?
8949605
hah, as if he could be a better person, when he barely counts as an organism to be crushed beneath our heels
8949611
Don't be like that, be a better person than him. We don't need to go to his level.
8949605
By which you mean have the emotional fortitude of a safe space dweller? Pass.
8949608
i'M smARtEr tHan yoU aNd YOu hAvE nO resPonsE
8949618
reported, Have a nice day~!
8949618
And you have the fortitude of a loaf of bread.
8949623
>i'M tELliNg On YOu
How surprising.
Oh and author, you're not supposed to begin a sentence with *And. I don't know who your editor is, but I recommend braining them with a mandolin (on principle alone).
8949625
Who told you I'm a baker?
8949628
you do realize, that if you want him to listen to you at all, you will get more with honey, than vinegar? And all you have been spewing out that anus you call a face is pure shit'n vinegar
8949629
You did.
8949630
You don't type with your face, moron. Though that would explain why your writing has the quality of a third grader's. Stop headbutting the keyboard and use your fingers. (In a perfect world, I would never have experienced the need to repeat this three times.)
8949636
In a perfect world, you would not feel the need to repeatedly attack writers for arbitrary mistakes, If you don't like the fic for something as pitiful as the title capitalization, then maybe it is better if people like you don't read it
8949643
Don't use words when you don't know their meaning. Your juvenile grammar is embarrassing as is.
8949623
You're really going to report someone for "attacking another user" when you, in the same thread, call that person a "pitiful excrement eating bastard of a plebeian masses rejected orgy baby" ?
8949674
He started, I tried to finish, I already blocked him, and he is now attacking my friends? I feel quite justified
8949677
You can feel whatever you want, but that is absolutely not an appropriate response to what was said to you.
8949684
Agreed, I went too far, but he has been goading me on by attacking my entire circle of friend repeatedly since I have blocked him
8949688
If they don't want to see his comments, then they need to block him, too. If they don't do this, and he comments negatively saying their stories are bad, then he is not doing anything wrong.
Negative comments, even scathing ones that you think exist solely for the pleasure of tearing other people down, are an inevitability. If you are to post your work on a public forum, whether you're a Hollywood movie producer or an amateur fanfiction writer, you have to be prepared for the fact that some people are going to hate what you create and say that it's terrible. Some of these people may genuinely be doing it only because they want to hurt people for fun, but others actually have valid points worth considering. For instance, titles are indeed supposed to be capitalized.
The mature and well-adjusted content creator is the one who views all negative feedback, even harsh and painful feedback like this, as an opportunity to learn and grow. If you are insulted by your critics and you turn to just flinging names and insults around right back, nothing is achieved, nobody has grown as a writer, and now everybody's worked up and miserable for no good reason. Tackle people like this by remaining calm as you carefully consider what they've said, not the manner in which they've said it. Don't escalate the situation into petty namecalling.
8949714
okay, I will attempt to be better. I am sorry for wasting your time
incredible. just needs a little work