• Published 22nd May 2018
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The Marine - zerofireking13



Out in the Everfree forest there lives a man named Mickey Young. He came to equestria some time ago, this is his story.

Comments ( 16 )

Well that seems like a suited punishment for RD and a good lesion in humility. That was unexpected with the twin con-artists popping up here but hopefully they will be out of their schemes for a good while, wished they got more of a beating but still nice that they got scared near death here. Good character development with Mickey here and I say he would be a good leader but he may had the right call to deny that from this small hive he helped. Wonder how long until Zecora gets that growth potion ready for him

That got sad fast.

Absolutely loving the story so far and the ICP song got a good chuckle outta me. Beautifully used and I think this might be the first story I've read with an ICP reference in it, so good on ya! Can't wait to read more of Mickey's adventure

The Dark Crystal is one of my top 5 favorite movies
1. The Last Starfighter
2. The Dark Crystal
3. Blazing Saddles
4. The Last Unicorn
5.Trading Places

Is this story still being worked on? It'll be a shame if a story like this died

Can someone send me a link to the old story?

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Yeah when’s the new chapter I’m really excited for what happens next

And thus I've come to the end so far....... really hope this is still alive, would be a shame if it's abandoned.

As a Jugglette seeing My Axe in this had me cackling and clapping in joy! WHOOP WHOOP! Loving this story and can't wait to see more!

This story isn’t dead, right?

Right?

Oh my god, I think this story might actually be dead. I really liked this one. Why is it always the good stories that get abandoned?!

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I don’t have as much time to write as I used to. I’m training to be a professional wrestler and I’ve got a lot of bills to pay.

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