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I didn't think No Means No was too bad, it just had a lot of miss-spellings and contextual missuses of words and homophones
Hmmm, some context about his past would be nice. I mean, I know that this story is relatively new and that his past may be brought up later on in more journal entries( Personally, I think you should call the chapters that, just for variety). Other than some grammar mistakes, it’s an interesting story!
I personally liked No means no. This journal entry seems to go all over the place. I'll read the next chapter to see if it improves.
Sounds like Zap Branagain right there.
Why did you do that to me?
Man, why do the anthro stories always sneak up on me?
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Do you not like huge tits
So super random thing 5'11 and 232 lbs is a fat body in the military at 6 foot I needed to be 190 lbs to make weight mind I was army thinking you can be like 195 ish in the marine corps
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It's almost pure muscle, the guy had nothing to do other than A) Build a house, B) Work, or C) Work out. The guy is built like a tank.
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Same here for me, for whatever reason.
NOOO HE MISSING STAN LEE
He gives me a bad first imprison of he personality I hope he gets better .other then that it sounds interesting.
Journal 1 and he talks pretty much only how celestia wants him to bang everyone and hes like nah... "I prefer zeb pussy"
This is a crackfic right?