OH SHIT I'M DYING TO READ THIS ONE

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First of all, how dare you.

Not sure if I will have the time (or when) to read it, but you already get an upvote because I liked some of the stuff I had read in the description and the warning.

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Haha, well I sincerely hope the story lives up to the description. :)

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(Slow claps) That pun was bad, and you should feel good about it!

Really love this story!

Nice to read a clopfic that's actually a love story. 10/10

And what an ending! :D Okay, very tender and lovely. And some well-written clop. 10/10. We love you, too, Pencil. ;)

Beautiful sentiments beautifully written. You never fail to poke my feels Anonpencil. Thanks for creating and sharing. Love you too.

I'm really, really glad I read this.

Any words I can say are just too pitiful to describe the beauty of this story, Pencil. You wrote what love truly is and should be.

And what I wish I had.

Thank you ever so much for writing and sharing this wonderful story.

I love you, too.

This is my favourite series on FimFic.

Why do you keep doing this to me?

My loins heart can only take so much!

i just read through the whole broken love saga up to this point in the last 4 hours. and i will outright admit this is the most emotionally synchronous i've felt with a story set and its characters in years, if not ever.

anon and berry... they're imperfectly perfect for each other. broken when alone. but together, theyre beautifully yet tragically whole.

(personally, id love a spinoff that has the both of them inexplicably healed and healthy. power of love or some shit, iunno.)

i never want this to end, but i know for a fact that time will run out someday. and it hurts... i was gonna add some or other really deep quote about time and love to the end of this but it slipped my mind just moments before i typed this. feelsbadman

How dare you make me cry,laugh,and smile at the same time!

Thank you so much for the story Pencil.

Wheeew, what an end to this story, wonderfully well done once again and nicely written.

Good show, good show.

I love reading this series, and yet another great entry.
The emotion and care put into the first chapter and her internal struggles is as great as when these characters were first established. The give and take in their relationship is what makes this story special.

I can picture nurse redheart talking to the doctors as they start to panic about his heart rate spiking so erratically.

"It's perfectly fine. He is having some personal time with his marefriend. If something goes wrong in there she will let us know."

Oh my, things took a turn for the saucy.

Ah, but it was good though! Such feeling! I could wrap myself in it.