In this story, after going out for a lunch date with Celestia, Celestia remembers a time she was Twilights young age, and what her heart desired. Soon after they finish eating, Celestia makes it her problem to help her student find love, with the help of her sister. However, this ends up putting Twilight into so many uncomfortable situations. Though Celestia does actually want her precious Twilight, to find happyness. That doesnt mean she cant enjoy the show while it lasts.
After so many Dates, Twilight feels like Celestias' Motives are nothing more, then for her mentors entertainment. Twilight decides that this is a two player game, and gets in contact with her brother, and sister in law, for her very own plot. What could possibly go wrong.
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That is a stupid knight to talk that way to royalty. A minor noble trying to talk to a royal like that could expect an execution before he was finished with the first sentence normally.
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Unfortuantly Twilight being a young royal doesnt carry that much wieght. I'm glad I managed to capture the disgust for him I was worried I didnt do enough to make people truly hate him in such a short part.
Are you enjoying the story currently?
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So far, yes, I think so. That knight actually managed to make Blueblood seem like a nice guy so no worries on if you managed to make him unlikable.
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Thats good im glad your enjoying the story ill be realeasing another chapter sometime later today with more banter and a rather promising suitor or is it. wait and see i wonder what this one will be like. Lets find out if luna has a better taste in stallions.
A question to the readers: Tell me, what are you all expecting from the next chapter?
I like to do this on cliff hangers, to encourage people to open up, so I can understand my audience better. Though its also a little bit of fun.
Friendly word of advice, link to the previous story.
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Trust me you don't want to see the other story this isn't a sequel its a redo.
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but if you insist on comparing the differences, I can pm the original to you, well what I have left of the original. However I wont be re-posting the original.