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Good chapter, can't wait to see more
As an Australian, that title bothers me. (People from other areas may still be bothered, but likely less so)
"Vary" and "very" are not pronounced the same, although it is similar enough that people who don't make the distinction would not be able to notice the difference when an Australian says the words unless that difference is explicitly pointed out. (the a is longer than the e)
"Marry" and "merry" have two quite distinct pronunciations. (And the difference between Merry and Mary [one 'r'] is the same as the difference between very and vary)
(edit: you appear to have changed the "marry" for "merry")
Rare it is to have a SpikexMayorMare fic.
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I try to give the people the things they don't know they want.
Nice going Twilight...nice going.
Man this is great. I hope to see these two really act on there passion. To be frank I want Spike to ravish this older female in ways she has never had. She deserves some love in her life and Spike can give her all she has been wanting and then some. She needs to be satisfied in every fantasy she has in every way possible. She has years of built up desire and best chance open to anything. And I strongly don't think she is ready for a young dragonborn in his sexual prime and all that comes with it. It will be well into the late night of the next morning before Spike tired out and she will never be the same after this intimate experience. I mean he seems to left a BIG impression on Rarity lol. I wonder if he is duel wielding his dragon swords or not lol
I thought Mayor Mare was just pretending to be old.
Spike would have to unleashed everything to ultimately satisfy her.
Were is my next chapter?
May the next chapter have Spike wielding his twin Dragon swords expertly, to soothe this lady's aching soul.