Writing My Little Pony stories for you so I can one day become an amazing author! Please comment and tell me what you think.
This story is a sequel to Rarity's Revenge
After getting back at Rainbow Dash for leaving her in the desert, Rarity felt that her punishment went too far for her. Now she's giving Rainbow a chance to get back at her by forcing her to do a hobby she might not like, and she has the perfect sport.
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Now that it's posted, could I send you my sequel idea now, or do you want me to wait?
This story could have done with a good editor. There are a several instances of incorrect spelling and diction, (like using 'conscience' instead of 'conscious,') and many more awkwardly worded sentences. I'm not a stickler for the technical side of writing if it doesn't break the flow of reading, but in this case, it does.