it's decent it could of done a little bit better but, the character development seems weird in some points like the start of the story... the middle part seems good but, the ending felt like it was rushed... no offence...

Noice

Yowzer this story was extremely my jam, well done!

And he was never seen again

After a certain thought entered my head I had a hard time imagining the picture. Unless that potion was luminescent, inside of the dragon's anus must be pitch dark

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I'll freely admit, this was my first swing at this type of story.
That being said, I'll take your sage wisdom to heart!