• Published 24th Jan 2018
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A Volatile Mixture - Dustchu



You've just been dumped off at your mother's junkyard for two weeks, and things only escalate from there.

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Enjoy you fecks :heart:

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Yes you did bby <3

Damn, this story is getting good!

And now that he has come to this realization, hurry up and fuck your sister and mother.

Dust please. So much Unf material. Let's hope there was nothing important out that window. Honestly, what would his sister or mother think, the perverted colt, not letting them in on the fun

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I certainly hope so.

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After some talk with my editors currently, I'm probably gonna shorten the time it takes to actually... you know, get to the point I know many want so badly, so no worries.

I was hoping this was a Apogee/Delta clop...

I guess it still is.

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"Shorten the time..."

So, we'll get it next year instead of the year after?

Next chapter of this by the end of July.

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Stay tuned.

9599592
Maaaybe >V>

9649392
You ask much of me. :V

9680467
Tick tock goes the clock...

Dustchuuuu! love your stuff! this story is amazing! and so are all of the stories ive read so far.

9796393
They'd be more amazing if they, you know, updated. At all.

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Yeah if only that stupid author would update already, smh

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It's not funny, mate. You never finish anything. I'm not trying to be a dick, but it's true.

9875602
Yep, I don't finish anything.

Ya know why? My writing drive and inspiration bounces from story to story, and I can't force myself to write for something I don't feel like writing for. I could force myself to write an update, but I won't be happy with it and it'll be of poor quality.

On top of that, I have a job I have to go to to make money to pay bills, and it exhausts me to the point that writing is just a chore and not fun for me. When I do manage to write, I do it to try and relax a bit, because I like creating worlds and weaving together stories people can enjoy.

Doesn't mean I won't do my best to finish stories though, it'll just take a bit my dude

#newchapterwhen

9928766
Whenever Office Love updates, you know how that goes.

9928894
We should harass Priest.

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Aggressively

My dick demands a new chapter!

NOW! 👏

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maybe next year, maybe tomorrow

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Don't give up on story

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Soon:tm:

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I won't.

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Aye, he does. Aileron looks exactly like his mother, though the colors are tweaked a bit.

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And I had a thought about the shape of his mane and his cutie mark cuz I think he's kinda cute. Do you mind if I have a go to make him in ponytown, since my pencil sketch can't really see the colors.

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Hell yeah, go right ahead! ^^

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Here's my interpretation, not too skilled at hand sketch but whatever: I imagined that Aileron is better at aviation rather than the astronotical stuff (still they kinda overlap) like Jet Stream since Apogee already inherited the space talents, and so I came up with this cutie mark of boomerang with a contrail.
According to your story, Ailly's like Delta but colors are lighter, so for coat color I modified Delta's a little, Hue and Saturation values the same, just with the Brightness value leveled up from 91 to 100 (maximum that it can go). On the mane, the dark blue and the lighter blue are from Apogee (brighter than DV's), eyes colors used in the editor is from Apogee too, since they are twins and her eyes are pretty much the same as Delta's if not looking close enough so I guess it's not too much of an issue.

Oh and this joke(kinda) about Ailly being negative came up in my mind: "Sometimes Jet Stream felt that even if he stay away from Delta and her grumbles, there's a second Delta named Aileron at home who will also criticize him" XD

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Duuuude, that's awesome! That came out great, I love what you did, especially with his CM, I never did figure that out :rainbowlaugh: Same for his special talent, nicely done dude!

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Ah, thanks! I originally thought about an aerofoil like Jet’s for his CM but it looks a bit ridiculous to leave contrail unless having a whole aircraft shape on there, so I swapped it to a boomerang and it looks quite good! Would be great if these additional details got mentioned in the next chapter XP

PS:The CM and aviation talent could also match chapter1 where it mentions Aileron being good at making paper planes lol

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Hehehe, I can definitely try mentioning it in the next chap, least I could do for the awesome artwork.
And it could! Thanks again.

Hmm... for a while it almost looked like the next chapter’s on the horizon, but it didn’t happened

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Unfortunately I've been very busy irl with work, which takes up a lot of my time :c

10538418
Aww, been there a while back in the semester , hope you get a break soon

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Next chapter of this by the end of July.

*pokes the soon tm button* Soooo is this still being worked on?

V8

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i guess not .

Okay. So, i must be fair to your original work. I enjoyed it and am saddened you have been so tied down being whipped by your job to invest more, but daddy has to pay the bills.

That said, using a named character for a 2nd person fic is perfect for me to be able to go into the story. One of my pet peeves is someone, instead of just using a fucking name, decodes to name the character anon and everyone says anon, nemo works better, anyway, my immersion breaks.

Thanks for the great write buddy. Ill be watching you, although Shakes may have you cornered now. Cheers.

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It is saddening, and I absolutely loath being this busy, but I'm happy to see people are still so interested in this fic even after it's been three years. Shakes does have me cornered, lmao, but he's done an amazing job so far and even if I can't will up the writing fuel to finish this sucker off, I know he'll end it on an incredible note.

King of incest after all.

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Lol. Yeah. King.

Thanks for laying the groundwork though.

Heyo, any updates to this? Fuckig love this story

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