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All hail best human Sunset Shimmer! Now welcome all to The Destiny of the Ancients

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In a way, believe it or not, tied to: The Destiny of the Ancients

It's been years since their days at Canterlot High School and maybe their lives have cahnged, maybe their bonds have broken, maybe they have separated or their roads have led to other parts.

Sunset has grown to be a famous art, with a future ahead of her, while Twilight is still the same quirky and awkward scientist, but their bonds are being tested by time and circumstances , after all, Twilight is still in a relationship with Timber and there is no real end to something like that.

Except that while drunk, their inhibitions are lowered, their desire for each other is shown and magic on Earth is raw and wild, doing stuff without explanation.

Is this magic that could change their lives and the lives of many other people.

As the world changes, their bonds will be put to the test and there is a question that needs to be answered; where does magic babies come from?

THE CLOCK TICKS ONE

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 13 )

Get a proofreader please. I can’t even get past the synopsis if the title has incorrect grammar.

This......is......BEYOND BEAUTIFUL!!!:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::raritydespair:0

Pre-read: The magic babies things, I know (or at least I'm fairly sure) I brought that up at some point but I can't remember where and when. I do recall that I found it funny.

Timber got NTR'd by Sunset? INSTANT FAV

Ri2

...Kind of odd how placid Timber and basically everyone else was to Twilight constantly cheating on him. Weird.

8629901
Not really, there are other forces in play, after all, this is just the first.

8629901
well timber spruce is just cardboard

This is a really, really good story, but please try finding a proof reader. I'm almost positive that there are groups on here that can help you find one, but I don't know any off the top of my head.

This might be a good story but considering several people have already said you need to proof read this and after 7 months the description still still full of bad grammar and poor spelling I think I will pass.

9050298
Is supposed to be like that, this is basically the first dimension to exist and is not stable.

9050469
Its supposed to have bad grammar and bad spelling? That is the worst excuse for not proof reading I have ever heard.

There should be more stories like this.

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