One night Twilight was reading in her library, as usual. Then she hears a knock at the door, and goes to find Starswirl the bearded at the door with a present. The present is none other than a book. But this book is Starswil's first ever book, only, it wasn't really written by him.
you miss wrote Starswirl
All u did was copy and paste a Skyrim book and change some names and add a few things, really dude really
Yes, and it's from the Elder Scrolls Online
Going to be harsh.
Come back when you write something. This submission is a 99.9% match to the elder scrolls book by the same name. The few words you changed are even mispelled.
How about a ponified dremora gets summoned for study and learns friendship includes tasty treats for behaving during lab tests? Don't mention who the summoner is directly, just use crude descriptors of the horrific pony, and the minions that visit.