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Jatheus

“For God so loved the world, that He gave His only Son, so that everyone who believes in Him will not perish, but have eternal life.”

Jatheus Joined 29th Jan, 2016 · Offline

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The Force
The Force #1 · Oct 23rd, 2017 · · ·
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That was outstanding, 8/10 why 8/10 because there was 2 small errors in this story. Although not visible enough to see, they were still there.

Jatheus
Jatheus #2 · Oct 23rd, 2017 · · ·
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Thank you so much! :twilightsmile:

Yeah, I always hunt for errors, but for as many as I catch, sometimes they get by me. :twilightsheepish:

The Force
The Force #3 · Oct 23rd, 2017 · · ·
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Well one I saw, was she instantly knew it was changelings by hearing someone's voice. I feel you could've explained that a little better.

Jatheus
Jatheus #4 · Oct 23rd, 2017 · · ·
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I gotcha... the story this was originally part of had 32 chapters setting up the scene, which is probably why I left it as vague as I did. I think you’re right though, and I’ll definitely check it again. Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

OmalleyCaboose5
OmalleyCaboose5 #5 · Feb 18th, 2018 · · ·
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You have a twisted, horrifying mind.

Jatheus
Jatheus #6 · Feb 18th, 2018 · · ·
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You are not the first person to say that. :twilightsheepish:

I take it as a compliment. :pinkiehappy:

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