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Jatheus


“For God so loved the world, that He gave His only Son, so that everyone who believes in Him will not perish, but have eternal life.”

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When a mare loses her memory, even down to her ability to speak, she is taken in by an old unicorn and taught how to function and take care of herself. This is the beginning of her quest of self-discovery to regain what she has lost.

This story is based on an original concept by Marrow-Pony.
https://www.deviantart.com/marrow-pony
His artwork and concept used by permission.
Story by me.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 16 )

This story was nice, and you made a really good character for how short it was. Wouldn’t mind a sequel :twilightsheepish:

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Aww, thanks for saying so! I definitely plan on having sequels. :pinkiehappy:

I decided to try something a little more episodic with this one because The Last Cutie Mark Crusader was incredibly consuming. As much fun as I had with it, if i tried to do another one of those right off, it'd be months or years more before I'd be posting. So... episodes! :ajsmug:

I love this! This is exactly what I've been wanting to read!! :pinkiehappy: :heart:

:pinkiesmile: exactly what I was looking for

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Thank you so much for saying so!

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Sorry... I can get a bit dramatic. :twilightblush:

9068229
Yay! I’m glad you enjoyed it! :twilightsmile:

short but wonderful, really liked it man

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Thank you so much! :twilightsmile:

What a nice story, but very short... Perhaps the author only does short stories?


*Sees The Last Crusader*


......... Well then.


(Anyway, when will the sequel be coming out?)

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Haha, thank you! :rainbowlaugh:

It is actually because of the time investment of The Last Cutie Mark Crusader that I have decided to do this episodic.

I don't have a timeline, but there will be sequels. Without putting too fine a point on it, I have several more chapters, first drafts anyway, already written.

So, thanks again! I'm glad you liked it! :twilightsmile:

Cool introduction bro.

I have to say you're really good at describing little details. :twilightsmile:

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Thank you so much! This series holds a special place for me. While the concept was given to me by someone else, I created everything else around it, Equestria notwithstanding.

I hope you enjoy.

This was a sweet little story. :twilightsmile:

I get the feeling it's going to take a sad turn though. :fluttershysad:

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