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Sweetiebellema121


Favorite pony: Sweetie belle

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When something is lost how do you cope with the pain. Will Rarity be able to; when through her own actions loses the most important thing in her life (Sweetie belle). What horrors will she suffer and in the end what will she be willing to give up to set things right.

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Oh man. This build up is going to lead to a heartcrushing conclusion isn't it? :pinkiesad2:

Like for you!

1134241 that it is and thank you

:facehoof: Proofreader, this needs one.

1139356 thank you for pointing this out. i will try to do better in the future

my god i didn't realise how many errors i made :fluttercry::fluttercry:
I'll try to do a better job proofreading next chapter :derpytongue2:

It has an interesting concept though and could prove interesting.

another thumbs down :fluttercry:

i'm sorry this chapter took so long. I had to rewrite it 2 or 3 times . originally Rarity was going to use somesort of communicatin mirror that acted like a phone.. I played around with the idea for awhile but decided it wouldn't work.

So i came up with the letter thing and because of that i was able to add Derpy a couple of chapters early:rainbowlaugh:

But if the thumbs down was because I called Derpy hooves Ditzy doo i'm extremely sorry. I wasn't trying to make fun of her or anything.:pinkiesad2:

If theres anything wrong with the chapter please let me know.:unsuresweetie: I'll certainly try and fix it :fluttershysad:

I am enjoying it. Probably are getting people who don't like anything 'dark' with this fandom. Keep writing what you want! Some of us are following it! :rainbowkiss:

I can't believe a month has past since i've started.:pinkiegasp:

if theres any spelling mistakes please let me know :unsuresweetie::derpyderp2:

and thank you for reading.:scootangel::scootangel:

and now we come to to regret part 3 :pinkiegasp:

She will get there and it will say!

Thank you Rarity!

But your sister is in another hospital!

(didnt translate to mario as well as I thought) :twilightblush:

Anger :flutterrage:
Despair :applecry:
Regret:pinkiesad2:
Sorrow:raritycry:
??? :scootangel: or ??? :unsuresweetie::fluttershyouch:

sorry had to do some editing :applecry::fluttercry: I
'm still working on Regret part three sorry about the update

Dafuq? ONE PIECE! + PONIES! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEQUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLSSSSS!

:trollestia::rainbowlaugh:that was interesting.

1354064 thank you it was my first pony video that i've ever seen :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

1354101 It's an interesting abridged series (in the third episode luffy has an ipony) . After i saw that episode i started watching friendship is witchcraft.then i started watching the real show :unsuresweetie::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

So...they basically stored Sweetie Belle in a frozen mourge?:rainbowderp:

1398375 yes theres a reason; death isn't a normal thing in ponyville they only have one type of morgue ; a cold chamber :ajsleepy:
more will explain in the next chapter. but thank you for asking

Fucking hell dude how can you be breaking so many grammar rules? Your story is being ruined by excessive use of exclamation marks, no capitalization, no punctuation... do you even fucking proof read your story? At all?

1399436 please tell which chapters i've messed up:fluttercry:
was it the new or one the old ones please tell i'll fix them :fluttercry:

Oh the horrid memories when playing my old Mario games! :fluttershbad:

1400819

At first I was reading through it like wtf?! Then when you said inspired by ArcaneAngel I was like heeeey thats me! OH yeah!!!

:twilightsmile:

1400888 yeah i just had to do it :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

it was too good to pass up:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

i was going to do it later but i didn't want to forget it :unsuresweetie:

1398375
I'm no expert, but I'm pretty sure a morgue would be cold anyways, they don't need the bodies decomposing after all. The cold keeps them from decomposing.

Well you see them out out on the street at night... walkin.

Pickin up all kinds of strangers... if the price is right.

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