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After losing contact with the Celestia (Bravo) and Cadence (charlie) teams; the Luna(Alpha) team lead by Apple Bloom is sent in to investigate.

Will Apple Bloom be able to find her friends?
Will they manage to figure out just what is going on in the Everfree Forest?
Will there be a giant Mansion?
Will they be attacked by Zombies,mutants and B.O.W.s?
Will this be on the test?

All this and more in Random Evil!!

*Just so you know all the ponies are adult age and yes there will be quite a few deaths.*

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 25 )

2669886 she tried cpr on a zombie she probably doesn't even realize she has or had wing:rainbowlaugh:

I like how she doesn't freak out over shooting the pony in the face, but when she holds his head, she screams. and the rabbit bit, dear god... She just shrugs it off! And the fact that she's killed and shot a pony on accident before leads us to this question: why don't they send her to fight the changelings? She'd massacre them without even trying!

2723403 the next chapter will be even crazier:moustache:

It's interesting so far, I'd like to see where this goes.
Oh man the memories of Resident Evil 1...

"You were almost a Jill Sandwich!" :rainbowlaugh:

2747133 the next chapter is almost done...just a few things left to take care of:moustache:

heres a preview of the chapter

"There's several reasons...the building was adandoned..."Noteworthy said with a sigh." After Mrs.Rich Accidently strangled herself while walking down a flight of stairs; the building designer, a zebra named Zecora...disappeared mysteriously."Noteworthy took in a deep breath ." Poor Mr.Rich was so distraught that he committed sucide...by stabbing himself seventy-four time in the back..."The blue stallion lowered his head."I still have the newspaper about the events."Noteworthy pulled an old newspaper from his saddlebag; showing a small pink filly with tears dripping down her face and a wide grin plastered across her face."The poor little filly and her adopted sister inherited the entire fortune..."

"Did we..."Apple grimaced as she looked the paper over."...Ever follow up on this case or....?"

"Whaddya mean?"Noteworthy said in a puzzled voice.

"Never...mind."Apple Bloom said slowly.

You've got problems with spacing. After periods, commas, and other punctuation marks there should be spaces.

Rumble......nice knowing ya*uses pinkie gate*

4101056 (it's ok i'll explain as you know pinkie pie can disrupt various universal laws such as gravity,mass,and anatomy. The pinkie gate is a small tear in the dimensional fabric that can expel its occupant and distance inti any safe location in other words the pinkie gate is simply how pinkie goes from a rock on the ground to a mid-flight ballon....do you get it?)

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