Well that was interesting.

My only advice: Add the 'Dark' and 'Comedy' tags. This is a story about Twilight getting literally fucked to death and then Luna helping her fuck her way back to life.

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This was a triumph. I'm leaving a note here: Huge Success

Yes, she had fantasized about these kinds of things, but the reality was so much better. She hadn't even considered what it would feel like to lifted into the air, to not even have the ground under her hooves, but now she was completely engulfed. There was nothing, no ground, no air, nothing around her but vines. Vines that wanted in her. And they filled her to the brim.

In short: everything is just as it should be.

Then a new vine slid into her mouth, to explore her throat. Twilight Sparkle barely noticed. She let the vines do what they would, for the vines were good.

Vines: "Don't worry, we have plenty of practice with alicorns."
: "Wow, really? Which one?"
Vines: "Yes."

"Wow," Luna said.
"Hey, it seemed like a good idea at the time."

Luna: "You have no idea how often I hear that one..."

Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.