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EvilRat


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Spike, Ember, and Thorax are having their monthly friendship meeting when he gets the idea to visit Sunset Shimmer in the human world. After going through the portal, he learns an unsettling and infuriating truth about his life. He doesn't take it very well.

Rated T for strong language, sexual content, and violence.

Art by CaptainLoserFace
Editing by Shardikku

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 16 )

Amusing, but Spike would happily hump their legs. He's used to be another species.

Well to be fair Thorax is kind of gay.

rofl loved it

NO. SPIKE MUST RAGE MORE THAN THAT

Comment posted by jskxjiuoa deleted Aug 31st, 2017
Comment posted by jskxjiuoa deleted Sep 20th, 2017

Nothing about the way this ended is amusing. It deserves more downvotes, plus a sequel where Fluttershy gets violently raped.

you know i like this story until neutering came up :twilightangry2: I mean come on, sure he crossed a line there but still Spike deserves better then that, also wouldn't Fluttershy be WAY against that kind of thing? just seems a bit out of character on her part

If I made this, Spike would still be mad, but much more controlled, and the ending would be better off with Spike reasoning with Twilight on what he saw. But no swearsies.

Poor Spike but he have a little sense, also, Fluttershy don't have any right to neuter him as he is as intelligent as her and she is not Spike owner.

Oh fuck, I knew I would laugh when I saw a story this down-voted. I rofled.

Okay, this will be my next reading, at least it's short and won't take too much time.

I've recorded it, but, oh dear, this was a bit more lewd then I expected, might not be able to put this on Youtube, But it can still go on my NSFW platform libsyn.

can you make a sequel of this of what happens after all 3 get back to Equestria?
This including Thorax and Ember finding out what neutered is and the Equestria girls Fluttershy finding out she neutered the spike not from her world.

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