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MrAquino


HOW LONG HAVE I BEEN GONE!?!?!?

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Spike is friends with Ember, the new Dragonlord, and Thorax, a nice Changeling. They've never meet each other and Spike wants them to be friends.

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I'd like to see this continued after the upcoming finale. Very well done on a technical level!

7637256 Actually, the finale is out now. "To Where and Back Again." You probably won't be able to find a perfect video of it, but you can find it.

I think Ember would be interesting to hear Spike's singing.

Spike returns to the room carrying a big box...
Spike: "It's OK! I've found the gameing stuff..... say did you hear some funny noises just now?.... what... what happened to the table?!! All the tea things are on the floor and all the cakes are squashed like somepony's sat on them!"
Ember: "I.. Uhh.... slipped?... on a cake, aaaand landed on the table?"
Thorax: "Umm...I went to help her get off (ow!) the table, slipped on another cake and landed on Ember on the table."

“I wasn't big and strong as the other dragons,” Ember replied. “Heh, I wouldn't be surprised if the next time we'd meet, you be a king.” Thorax chuckled a bit.
“That's not going to be for a while. And what will a Changeling King look like?”
“... Perhaps like a deer?” They both laughed at the joke. Spike scratched his head.

I thought Thorax had more of a stagbeetle look to him really; look at his 'antlers' - they look like stagbeetle pincers.

Great start loving it

“Aww… I just wanted to do what's write.

right.

Pretty neat story, btw.

I like this. I like this a lot more than my unborn child.

I don't have one because nobody wants to date a freak, but if I had an unborn child I would love this chapter more than it.

Please come out with more chapters. How about a random tea party or something?

7642742 Fun fact by the way; King Thorax's design is actually based on Oberon, the mythical king of the fairies in some folklore. So...the new changelings could possibly be some sort of fairies now?

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Sorry, but this is all I can think of. I know, very sequel bait-like, especially since I won't be doing it. However, I'll be fine as a co-author if someone wants to make said sequel.

7642763 to be honest I don't like the new look

I don't think Ember has ever met Flurry Heart.

7643007 Neither did I, to be honest. I figured maybe a changed Changeling would be the opposite colors of black, blue, and green... And maybe not have holes.

So my boy Spike have very powerful friends. Great story :moustache:

7643072 I thought the changelings would be the same just with no cheese legs and butterfly wings

7642763 And the secondary horns are reminiscent of a stag beetle.

I really like the set and resolution here. Especially since the show has been already slowly on track with forging bonds with other nations for the last three seasons. We have Saddle Arabia, Marston IA, Crystal Empire, Yakyakkistan, Griffinstone, (as shown with the recent friendship summits), and now these last two.

Now we just need Diamonda, (Diamond Dog Kingdom), and the Centaur/Gargoyles lands ruled by King Vorak and Queen Haydon, plus their son Prince Scorpan. Maybe Season 7 will she'd some light on this idea. Either way great story.

7643007 Give it time. Besides you'll always have the comics, the fan art and the fanfiction if you prefer the old changelings. And might I just say that isn't the whole point of the changelings to...change? If you can't accept this 'change' then what was the point of liking changelings to begin with?

7643125 Exactly. Good eyes this one has, folks. Watch out - he sees all!

No, I'm not being sarcastic, I'm praising your observation skills in a humorous way.

7643826 And I don't think it needs mentioning, but Chrysalis is still at large, so there's always a possibility she's making love to herself right now so she can birth a fresh hive. Yeah I don't really know how a changeling queen gets pregnant in the first place without viable suitors, but whatever get her in the mood will probably get more of those dark changelings you like so much back on the scene again. And if not? There's always the fan animations, dude.

So give these new guys a chance. They might not come up that often in the show so you won't be bothered by them so much anyway, or if they get their own episode it might make you look at them in a better way.

7643946 *starts drinking a mixed soda concocktion called Liquid Zilla (created by yours truly)*

It would have been really nice to have a spoiler warning on Chapter 2. The finale doesn't officially air until Oct 22nd.

This is small but it was Klutzy draconequus not silly draconequus. Unless in this fic the twist is that is a evil changeling disguised as Thorax.

My word is law law

I just wanted to do what's write

Probably should fix those.:twilightsmile:

This is the start of somehting glorious.

They've never meet each other and Spike wants them to be friends.

Should be "met".

(This is from the description, not the story itself)

You know, it didn't occur to me until just now, but Spike has helped FIVE people with their royal status. Thorax would not have been able to become a king if Spike hadn't helped convince ponies to give him a chance and be his friends. Ember would not have become Dragon Lord without his help. He saved the Crystal Empire, solidifying Cadance and Shining's positions as its new rulers. And Spike was there to cheer Twilight up and help her finish Starswirl's final spell which turned her into an alicorn princess...!

You know something, that would make an interesting concept for a story. Just imagine, various ponies from all over Equestria coming to seek his favor because they think he might make them into royalty. The possibility for shenanigans is immense.

The crazy thing is that there is now going to be an episode focusing on this same thing. Wait..... does that mean this guy is psychic?

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I like to think I am. I did a thing for a fic called Mares in Black where Bon Bon was an agent... It came true in the 100th episode.

Funny that this came out before Triple Treat but nonetheless enjoyable. Most of the story is just repeating old episodes but I can see that the intention was to show how Ember and Thorax are similar in terms of their lives somewhat and how they met Spike.

You should sue Hasbro. they totally took this idea away from you. Lol!

(In case you didn’t know... I’m talking about the episode “Triple Threat”)

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I know. Same could be said for my Mares in Black when the 100th episode revealed that Bon Bon was in fact a secret agent that handled dangerous creatures.

Ah 'Triple Threat' is the title of the episode...read about it on the Wiki and it honestly disappointed me. You did a WAY better job of Ember and Thorax becoming friends than that episode did, especially since I also see Spike as the type who'd be excited to introduce his friends to each other rather than nervous.

These two are some of my favorite characters. I also ship them:heart:

“Silly Draconequus.”

Clutzy Draconequus.

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