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eric-emanwu


I enjoy ponies when they're in stories of great character and plot. Don't expect anything of my own, but I'll be happy to critique what you have.

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This story is a sequel to The Little Pony Legend: Legend of Everfree


For so long, Avatar Korra and her fellow Elements of Harmony fought to ensure the safety and harmony of 2 worlds. But they weren't all about just smiting their enemies with rainbows. They believed in helping everypony and everyone.

But though their generosity extended to many, not everyone was as sympathetic or forgiving. That's when Korra and her friends came up with an idea. A way to harmonize between forgiveness and penance and thus find a way to give their friends a way back into being part of the new harmony of the worlds.

This is a story of hope and change. A story of proving good intent, and coming into who many were meant to be. Of friendships formed, and hard truths confronted. Of secret good, and public praise.

You know the Legend of the Elements. Now know the story of The Redeemers.

Also, all credit to the basics of this story is due to author Maggiesheartlove for thinking up this crossover in the first place.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 14 )

I'm honestly impressed! You did an amazing job with this chapter, and as such, have earned a fave!

I will admit, I was surprised to see this posted already, but I am delighted to say that I enjoyed reading it! You did a wonderful job staying true to the tone of the series and diving more into the moments we haven't seen yet. I'm not entirely sure how I feel about this Revelation that Celestial adopted Sunset Shimmer as her daugther. Not saying it's bad, but I'm not sure how it fits since it was never established or hinted at before. If you'd like, please send me a note and we can discuss it. Maybe there's something there that I missed. I'm not upset about it, I would just like to hear your imput. Maybe there's something I missed. If that's okay with you.

Overall, this was a delight to read and a very smart choice in having Sunset Shimmer being the anchor point as you said. I'm eager to see what happens next! :heart::pinkiehappy:

Wait, P'Li? I thought she was dead.

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Well, it makes sense in the context of this universe. You see, this is...A SPIN OFF!

Look at the rest of The Little Pony Legend for context on how P'Li managed to stay alive.

이야기는 좋았어요! 캐릭터 개발과 장면 사이를 전환하는 방식을 좋아했습니다! 당신의 설명이 나를 행복하게 만들었고 당신이 잘하기를 바랍니다! 세탁물에 소스를 넣지 않도록하십시오!

And so the prologue ends... But the real story begins...

Need more update! I started to like this story!

Sunset is at least 10 years older then these ponies. They would not have been her classmates.

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