Hi! I'm NightmareMoont. I adore My Little Pony, although my friends think I'm crazy...
Alexis Creek has always lived a normal life, except for one thing: she's a pegasister.
So what will happen when she is offered the opportunity of a lifetime? Find out. Okay, Alexis is more dragged there and everpony is scared to death by her and it turns out she.. nevermind, spoiler! Read to find out. (Ugh, so cliche!)
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Hmmm.... I like this. Its comedy mixed with... erm.... something. But I digress, good story chap.
970836 Thanks for your comment :D
agreed nice story
ooh my god yes finally one when the human is a girl! and i really like this story please make more
this be getting good!!!!!!!!!!
one of my fav story's ever!!!!!!!! 
story dead?:0
1230516 Nah, just have writer's block. I'll try to work on the next chappie.
What?
1233124 That's the reaction I was hoping for. This was purely a "what did I just read?!" chapter.
1237371 the thing that annoyed me was that it's now in 3rd person inserted of 1st
1237740
I'll fix that... I just don't know what went wrong! Okay, I've unpublished the chapter and I'm going to rewrite it in a more Alexis-ish point of view, so I'm going to add a bunch of things.
Wow. I just realized how weird that chapter was. At the end, it switched from third person to first. o_O!?
Yup, the random tag definitely fits.
I'll be your editor if you want, I read a lot so I tend to notice grammar and spelling mistakes.
1446556 Thankies! I'm technically not allowed on the computer until friday (hehe) so I'll PM you when I can (don't know when.)
Ok! I'm always ready to help!
1446993 Okay... so how should we do it? Google docs?
go on.......
1516085 eeeyup! Just pm the link and I'll correct it!
yeah....kinda hard to dispute that
some nice points...maybe too speedy at points too though
Lauren....do you know the way to Equestia and aren't telling us
and suddenly plot
The Royal Canterlock?....on no....LUNA'S GETTING INTO WRESTLING....EVERYPONY RUN
BUMP...BUMP....BUMP
not the fourth wall
ok.....kinda a huge jump there.......
Dude, it seems kinda unrealistic. No one ever teases teenage girls nor grown women for watching the show. Why? Because the show is considered girl material and women aren't judged for watching cartoons unlike men. So there's no way anybody mock her without getting a witty comeback in return
DUDE! Ur supposed to Pm the chapter so I can proofread it!
Okay, the story kinda got better... still has some major weak points like the one where I find it difficult to discern between Alex's thoughts and lines.
1521548 Well, still. My Little Pony. Maybe girls don't get teased that much, but still, it's a show for three year olds (or at least WAS).
(And I should know, because I'm a girl)
1521620 FAIL.... oh well... I'll just post the chapter on the google docs which by the way is here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/12e15yn-jj_1S31rzS4pygrRqfYiq-XFG1J29wq3od9M/edit
I need to give you permission, right?
1523188 this ones fine. Just next chapter, don't forget, k? And idk if u need to give me permission
1523220 Almost done with the new chapter, I'll PM it to you sometime today.
Interesting...and first!!
HATERS
"Haters gona hate"
I'm redoing the first chapter right now. It's going to be at least 1,000 times better!
2092554 Who was? o_o
No update today, sorry!!! But both two parts will be on Sunday...
This is strange, an hour ago I checked how many views there were today - it was something depressing like 6 - and now it's 68...?
I'm confused, there are no referrals... 
Is it a glitch or something??
Rape and dismemberment?
2127430 Um... No.
I think that maybe there should be some epic truth about this trixie actually not bein trixie, and that was just an apparition by sombra.
Alexis goes epicey and beats the beeeeeeep outta sombra with Luna! (too random?)
Earthling, not earthian
Haha, clever references!
.........jeez so much random