Dan became a brony and was in the middle of a My Little Pony Friendship is Magic Youtube marathon when Twilight Sparkle herself comes and asks for Dan's help to defeat Discord because for some reason The Elements of Harmony aren't working on him. Twilight's reason for bringing Dan to Equestria to beat Discord is we need a jerk to beat a jerk. With help from Applejack, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle Dan weakens and beats Discord then gets the means to return to Equestria whenever he wants to what happens next let's find out right now?
Chapters (13)
1057020 That's funny because the next episode/ chapter is Dan vs. The Cutie Mark Crusaders and while Sweetie Belle won't be speaking Japanese there will be plenty of her in the episode. P.s. I've seen and enjoyed that video many times.
when's next update???
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I really wanted to like this story, but it's so hard when it's hard to read.
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Dang straight.
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Hey, you! What kind of Dan crossover is this? Did you write it in Afrikaans or something? I can't read a word of this garbage! Maaan if I find you, you're going to wish you were never born you ingrate! And what's this about a hiatus? You're really looking for trouble, aren't you? I suppose I ought to have expected this. Don't send a dbzponyninja to do a Dan's job...
Ok... what in the name of ice is this?! It's... awful!
Why?
1. I can't understand even one sentence in this.... If I start to write this in croatian, I think more people would understand that than this!
2. This is just a block of words!
3. Your grammar is in %$##$&.
4. Dan likes MLP and he is a brony?
Yeah, no.
I really like Dan Vs. MLP crossovers, but this is... just no! Find a proofreader!
I understand I like this no how about a no no and no
WTF is this i can read this but this is a piece of Garbage in One And Im Out!
Three words. WALL. OF. TEXT. Fix this problem, and it will be a very good story idea.
And this can only end so well. I'll read this eventually