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BChunter426


New to writing and looking to improve my skills. I have some stories on other platforms I think might be enjoyed by the community as well,

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Twilight and Sunset are living together. they've had a good day, but it's time to start getting ready for bed. One of them is obviously more ready for bed than the other.

Art by: https://twitter.com/adgerelli

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AHHH! That was cute! I liked how Sunset was acting like complete child and then immediately go to usual, care free Sunset then right back to being childish. Also, Not sure if you meant to but, there were A LOT of sentences that after reading over once, you have to go back and read it again thinking; 'there is something else I can see being there'. Sunset as the little spoon...honestly didn't see that coming.

This was really sweet :heart:
No seriously, I have a toothache :applecry:

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Haha just as planned :trixieshiftleft:

That's exactly how I would envision Sunset before she's ready to go to sleep. This was a beautiful and funny story, very nice work.

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Thank you :) I had a lot of fun writing it and I’m glad to see that it has garnered such a positive reception :)

Hey I know you're a new writer, and I know the struggle of that, but it's important to credit your artists, and I know the artist behind your cover art rather well, so if you won't mind editing your description to add https://twitter.com/adgerelli as the source of your cover art, that'd be appreciated! :raritywink:

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Shit! I thought I had done that forever ago! Thank you for bringing that to my attention. I’m also gonna make sure the artist is credited on my other story. Thank you again. I appreciate it :twilightsmile: the source is already connected to the image luckily, but I’ll add a url in the description as well

"I'm a grumpy koala now." Sunset says as she leans back enough to look Twilight in the eyes with an exaggerated frown plastered in her face.

It was at this point I started laughing so bad my mom mistook me for crying lmao. :rainbowlaugh:🤣

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