Cuddle-Your-Own-Celestia

by CategoricalGrant

Chapter 19

“O-oh,” she replies softly.

“I wanted tonight to be special for you,” you tell her. “I won’t always be here; I’m going home to my own dimension, soon. I just wanted to make sure that you know I care about you, my special sunshine, and that an entire nation of ponies do, too.”

The sadness slowly recedes from her face as she contemplates your words. “You’re not just sweet and a good cuddler,” she says, pulling you closer to her, “but you’re wise, too.”

You raise an eyebrow. No human has called you wise before. “Well, thank you Princess. It’s an honor to be called as such by you.”

“So formal,” she observes of you, playfully and gently smacking your chest with a hoof.

“We still have a few days left in my visit. How do you want to spend them?”

“I don’t know yet…But I’ll think of something. We’ll make the most of it.”

GREAT ENDING- BITTERSWEET

Comments

[optimusprime142]

CYOA? Oh boy...

[Everglue Horace]

so wait, you are the teddy bear and not the other way around??? WHat!?

[TgTfProductions]

liked the premise

[Lazydrill]

I'm going to read this later. Who doesn't want to read a snuggle fic on occasion?

[PonyDragon]

Good idea with this story.
(I got something called "GOOD ENDING", by the way.)

But I have suggestion: Instead of writing

If you choose to [redacted], proceed to Chapter 1.

you should rather use

If you choose to [redacted], proceed to Chapter 1.

This makes it a bit easier to navigate.

[moviemaster8510]

Liking for a fun time, but I'd recommend linking your chapters for easier access.

[Sweetblue]

8185787
Well that might be efficient but not in the spirit of all those choose your own adventure books. Some shuffling of book is to me needed to appreciate the flashbacks from the famous five to me at the least... even if there was no cuddling involved with them.

[CategoricalGrant]

8185610 Including links may be a good idea, you're right. I'll head bafk and include them when I find the time.

[moviemaster8510]

8186156 Fair enough.

[CategoricalGrant]

8186401 Yeah, I've already gotten that feedback a few times. I'm going to put in the links when I have some time to do it.

[abronie]

(gone through a few endings)

This was great. A nice, short chapters. One of the better CYOA stories I've read here, especially since all of the chapters were completed (unlike 2 other stories). Thanks for this.

[MrAquino]

Very nice. Will we get a spiritual sequel with Princess Luna?

[CategoricalGrant]

8187211 This has been such a hit that YES, YES YOU WILL!

[Starry Wisp]

At first, I got Great Ending, then Perfect Ending. This was so nice, even though it was hard to imagine myself in the position. Especially when she called me 'handsome', and I am a girl... It was still enjoyable, and warmed me up with virtual floofy pony snuggles!

[MrAquino]

8187282

[CategoricalGrant]

8187303 I'm sorry that I didn't make the character gender-neutral...You have my permission to pretend!
I'm really glad you enjoyed! :)

[batran]

Simply a marvelous story if I do say so myself

[CategoricalGrant]

8187690 I'm really glad that you enjoyed!

[Mr mustash]

I quite enjoyed this, great story/adventure

Only with there were more story's like this one.

[Everglue Horace]

8187303
Other than 'cute' are there any other gender neutral terms I should be aware of?

[CategoricalGrant]

8187945 Adam Jensen!? "I never asked for this!"

[Harmless Bokoblin]

8188434 Take a chill pill.

[CategoricalGrant]

8188527 I get excited when I see an opportunity to reference a game.

[Harmless Bokoblin]

8188570
Leonard Snart, robber of ATMs ring a bell?

[Harmless Bokoblin]

8188570
Sorry, that sounded way meaner than I meant it to.

[Wonderbolt Writer]

Just a few of my thoughts about da story.

one morning you simply woke up in the middle of Ponyville in your underwear- bed, sheets, and all!

Me: I'm off to a great start I see!

Your name had entered the parlance of even the highest-running social circles in Equestria ,

Me: Heck yeah it did! And why wouldn't it?

“So, I know it’s silly…but would you like to go on a fake date with me?” she asks you.

Me: Nuh uh, your highness. Imma gonna Chapter 7 this crap!

“That was one of the best nights of my life. It was just like you said- you made me feel special and cared for!”
Me: Well shucks...*feels all fuzzy inside*

[ponyaddict]

Very nice work. If you want to make it a little more navigable, you can put hyperlinks to the appropriate chapters. So a link to, say, chapter 8 could be embedded with this: [url=https://www.fimfiction.net/story/374188/9/cuddle-your-own-celestia/chapter-8]Chapter 8[/url]

[CategoricalGrant]

8190813 Thanks, I've already gotten that feedback from 5 or 6 people. It's a lot of work to justify putting them in here, but I'll be implementing that feature in the sequel.

[FnordBear]

This is so sweet it gave me diabetes.
*tosses down blood sugar monitor*
I like it! Another!

[Texas Style Brony]

I love this story! Your cuddle stories are always so sweet and uplifting!

[CategoricalGrant]

8196579 Thanks! Sequel will *probably* be out tomorrow.

[Silver Inkwell]

Two words
Fuck you Anon
But other than that
Will read... later

[CategoricalGrant]

8201454 *Bows gracefully*

[Eroraf86]

Perfect ending for the win! I really want cuddles now.

[Sulpher]

8958426
Didn’t read it, ultimate speed run
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[SirShadestrider]

8967753
I've read Date Your Own Dashie, and I still need to read the rest of Love Your Own Luna, though I have read a fair chunk of it.

[SirShadestrider]

9396461
My mistake.

[Black--Soul]

Damn fine adventure

[Blue Spy s Head]

Haha, yes. First try, perfect ending.

[SLASH AN ASSASSIN]

8201544
Excuse me categoricalgrant when will the story love-your-own-luna be finished because I would really love to read it