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What the Big Ponies Do

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PiMan

PiMan #1 · Jun 27th, 2017 · 5 · ·

The clop wasn't bad, although it was a bit frantic (and a few fetishes that aren't to my taste, such as spanking).
I would criticise the start however; the opening was very brief and I think something more to bridge the gap between the two scenes would have helped a lot. You've got no foreplay and nothing confronting the fact it is incest; Rarity treating Sweetie as mature is one thing, but it is a big leap to go from that to incest.

doomie-22 #2 · Jun 27th, 2017 · 1 · ·

8259281 Yeah, that's true.

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