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"Fine. I'll do it myself." -Horndog (who has a new Discord server, PM for details), having run out of stories containing his fetishes.

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Different versions, quite an interesting idea

It allows me to fit more fetishes into a single story.


Good thinking! If I may say, I have something familiar in mind. Also, any advise in making good descriptions?

Start with a hook.

Write the preceding events to the beginning to the story, make sure to include why things are the way they are.

Write the lead up to the action, but skip almost all the details. Just include the one that triggers the action.

Finally, write vague hints about what happens in the action to give the readers a taste of what they're in for.

If you want, include some disclaimers, just know that disclaimers also help with searching, to get better exposure.

Those extra two versions are definitely a bummer to the story and definitely to the porn. People will always read all the versions of it means more porn.

Perfect fix would be cutting out the copy-and-paste parts or shortening them considerably, so that the reader doesn't need to read the same thing over and over again.

At this state, reader can read through a single story, then it becomes a chore just to get through all the repetitive text towards the good stuff.

Admittedly, it wasn't quite as necessary in this story as some of my others, but for most of my stories, the Version B is rather extreme. (Read: pool balls getting shoved up a guy's urethra to end up in his balls, or literal feet of prolapse, and that's just with my other two stories. There's more to come.) The idea behind this format is that you read the chapter contents and pick which version of events you'd like to see, and you don't have to worry about reading the other chapters cause you won't be missing out on any story if you don't. If you do decide to read all the chapters, just know that I change small details in all of the copy and paste bits to subtly alter the world around the events. It isn't a perfect system, and I realize that, but I feel like it's a good way to allow people to read what they're comfortable with. This way, I can cater to both the people who do like the more extreme versions of events and the people who would prefer the filly to innocently rub their tailhole without becoming a gaping incestuous size queen on their first night of experimentation. For those people who want both, just know that I try pretty hard to add variance and flavor while still keeping the story coherent.

If it's any consolation, I think this is going to be my only triplet. Two versions just works better and is easier to write.

All we've got to help us is each other. We authors have got to stick together.

Yeah. There doesn't seem there to be any nice way around this.

Perhaps some sort of interactive fiction that modifies what you read based on a survey of your likes and dislikes? That way, you only encounter what you want while only needing to read the story once.

Came back to this one, finally. You're friggen good. Adorable spots of characterization and a filly's wandering mind, plenty of world-implicating lewd details, and just a great tone of questionable innocence and impending sexiness.

I wanna see more ponies from you. <3


You're too generous with your praise. I'm just throwing out whatever sounds hot to me at the moment.
Admittedly, worldbuilding is pretty hot to me. I want a world where these things happen, so I frequently spend more time building the world than the scene.

As for more ponies, I'm sorry it's taking so long. I have so many ideas and so little time to write them. There will be more though, I just don't know which idea will be finished first.

I liked this one a lot, but I really would have liked it more if it wasn't all anal. A vaginal-only version would have been really nice, and definitely would have pushed it into "favorite" territory for me

Yeah, a lot of people prefer vaginal, but there are already so many vaginal only stories out there that I had to show that butt some love. It probably also doesn't help that vaginal doesn't really interest me. I'm glad you liked it otherwise though.

Yeah, the writing was really good, and it generally checked a lot of boxes for me (self-examination, observations on nudity/sex in a society without taboos around them, etc.). Plus the writing is really solid.

I just really don't like anal.


To each their own. If everybody was the same, the world would be really boring.

Will we ever see her take that invitation


In all seriousness though, yes. As soon as I finish writing it, I'll throw it on here as a sequel.

Im really hoping for a sequel where she plays with her friends, the fillies and the colts.

Then I have excellent news for you! That exact sequel is about half written at the moment. It's not currently my highest priority story, but it is in line and should be done sooner rather than later.

hope we get a nice reaction from the colts getting their prostate poked or licked.

Of course, of course. There's only going to be one boy in this story but he's going to enjoy the buttlicking immensely.

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