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Zubric


Love to write whatever comes to mind and enjoy Brony stuff.

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Comment posted by NeverEatTheLemonsAlone deleted May 22nd, 2017

:heart:nice work:twilightsmile:

8184480 thanks , i went over it nad fixed some errors should be easier to read some parts now

She must really trust those spiders.

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There's plenty of food in their forest habitat, so there's no need to them to deceive her. Plus I like to think animals have nothing to hide. They usually only communicate with their own kind, and their own kind never have any agenda that isn't also their own, so there's no place for cloak and dagger in the non-sapient animal kingdom. Add that to the fact that Fluttershy can understand and be understood by the Star Spiders, and you have a pretty air tight package of security.

...No pun intended, of course. Though that does raise the question. Since the cocoons spiders weave around their prey are air tight by design to preserve the prey, wouldn't that make Fluttershy's bondage here closer to an egg sack? ...You know, unless those are air tight too. In which case how is Fluttershy safe? If it's ingrained in their instincts to weave air tight cocoons, how is this feasible?

...I think my skull almost became a brazen bull for my brain. I was thinking too hard and I smelled copper. This is why we don't deconstruct porn, people. Let it be a lesson I learned the hard way so you don't have to.

Pretty neat :twilightsmile:

I wanna see a sequel where Dash gets wrapped. I haven't seen any fics of Dash being wrapped without it ending fatally, which is a bit of a turn off.

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XD haha all true, i mean hell spiders venom is meant for small insects and not large ponies so one spider bites if they can even pierce the flesh that is, wouldn't do anything. But hey, all ignored fo the sake of porn Tehehehe.

do more fluttershy in a web cocoons:heart:

Seems like Rainbow Dash likes the idea too. Maybe in the sequel Rainbow Dash can get in a web cocoon as well.

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