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Watering the Cactus: A Trenderburn Clopfic

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MrSegasilver #1 · May 22nd, 2017 · · ·

Good story, however it could benefit from some better dialogue and slower pacing. Overall a good story though, but maybe im biased to pee <3

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Vik #2 · May 27th, 2017 · · ·

8181106 Thanks MrSegasilver, I appreciate your critique and will keep it in mind. Glad you enjoyed the story. :)

forestpip #3 · Oct 3rd, 2017 · · ·

Try to show not tell. I was interested by the premise, but it felt over-explained.

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