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That was good. I really enjoyed that pee scene.
But what caught me off guard was the fact this was a drama fic, I felt genuinely bad for Sprout.
Maybe some dialogue parts were a little too long, like the characters were just spitting words after words without stopping, but in overall this was pretty good, you're getting better at writing. Keep up the good work!
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm glad to hear that you think my writing has gotten better.
I have to admit that I feel bad for Sprout too. I definitely want to do some more HitchxSprout stuff in the future.