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I like ponies. I like writing. Why not put them together and write pony stories?

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Princess Celestia and Princess Luna believe that Equestria has and always will remain peaceful. However the deep division lines that run between the tribes, the constant tension and the casual racism means that one event can turn Equestria into a war zone.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 10 )

This is intense! Power struggles, coup-de-tats, forbidden love, secret identities? I can't wait to see what happens next! :twilightsmile:

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Glad you are enjoying the story :twilightsmile:

I not one for cold hard dead murder. Heck even in my stories i give villiens quick deaths. But i don't go into that much detail for it. I stop reading half way through because of the violence. Not my cup of tea.

As for the story itself. It seems to be well written with no signs of grammer error. Keep up the good work in writing stories.

Thank you for the feedback 😊

If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

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Are you talking about the dialects or the pitch and tone of their voices?

suprise the princess planned the war from the begining hahaha

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Glad you're enjoying the story! :twilightsmile:

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da tis good almost as good as sandvich

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