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Israel Yabuki


Canon x OC, that's my specialty, both in art and in MLP stories

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One problem with the story, plane windows are small, also you wouldn’t get sucked outside even if the door was shut, you’re thinking of space.

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It was all that popped into my head.

The only problem with this story is that flurry heart is in it

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I don't think I remember adding Flurry Heart to my Rarity story.

Well done. I cant wait to see what else you have for this.

Great start bro with this beautiful mare. Rarity is a mare I would love to get married with other than my other Waifu’s

I thought you add the clop scene in the third chapter and final?

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That's what I plan to do, but I had to re-write this story from scratch so the viewers won't get confused

I wonder are you still gonna do Spitfire’s story with her human lover?

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I will, probably after the Gilda and Daring Do fics

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Alright cool any nightmare night specials coming this year?

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Out those two who are you gonna do first? Gilda,or Daring Do?

Or are you gonna have it for a surprise for us?

i love it keep up the good work please don't forget princess skystar story you still going to write it ?

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Well, I'm hoping to get in a couple of chapters for Equestria Girls: The Haunted

SO beautiful. Keep up the good work.

That was so cool :rainbowdetermined2:. I had just finished reading “More Than An Assistant” and you just updated this :pinkiegasp:.


The only thing I found were a few grammatical errors (I should have written them down :facehoof:) but was really good. Although she didn’t call him “Master” in the end (as per their conversation :applecry:) but hopefully it’ll be in the next chapter :twilightsheepish:. That is if you’re making one more :twilightoops:.

Thanks for the quick update too :ajsmug:. Hope to see the next one just a quick :raritystarry:.

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Oh here, let me fix the "master" bit

Amazing job my friend. Keep up the good work.

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I’m surprised you didn’t add the name of there daughter Crystal Gem and the proposal oh well good ending though

Despite the beauty of the view, the only thing the sea made you think of was all the tears you shedded during your parents’ funeral.

Should be shed.

Thus, the echoes of the screams finally seized.

Should be ceased.

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Oh, whoops. Guess I got the two mixed up

So while this guy ends up in Equestria, all those other people on the plane with him died. That's dark.

U know, this could be a running gag every time a human can to Equestria and call them hairless monkey/ape. But I like the monkey.

Is there a story with spike and rarity on the beach with spike putting sunscreen lotion on rarity and they end up having sex?

Spike went ahead and committed #NeccRope

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oh. Well, with all due respect, let's not make suicide jokes. I'm extremely against it

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I will respect your wishes, I am sorry...

Can't believe he got his first kiss even though he and Rarity just met.

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I already warned him, no need to worry

You reached for a for and started eating the salad, savoring how tasty it is.

I think you Missed a K on Fork.

With those last words, the impact of the plane caused it to explode and engulf you in the flames. Thus, the echoes of the screams finally seized.

Not to ruin a dramatic moment, but I think you meant 'ceased'.

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