One problem with the story, plane windows are small, also you wouldn’t get sucked outside even if the door was shut, you’re thinking of space.

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It was all that popped into my head.

The only problem with this story is that flurry heart is in it

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I don't think I remember adding Flurry Heart to my Rarity story.

Well done. I cant wait to see what else you have for this.

Great start bro with this beautiful mare. Rarity is a mare I would love to get married with other than my other Waifu’s

I thought you add the clop scene in the third chapter and final?

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That's what I plan to do, but I had to re-write this story from scratch so the viewers won't get confused

Nicely done!

Despite the beauty of the view, the only thing the sea made you think of was all the tears you shedded during your parents’ funeral.

Should be shed.

Thus, the echoes of the screams finally seized.

Should be ceased.

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Oh, whoops. Guess I got the two mixed up

So while this guy ends up in Equestria, all those other people on the plane with him died. That's dark.

With those last words, the impact of the plane caused it to explode and engulf you in the flames. Thus, the echoes of the screams finally seized.

Not to ruin a dramatic moment, but I think you meant 'ceased'.