That was so cool . I had just finished reading “More Than An Assistant” and you just updated this .

The only thing I found were a few grammatical errors (I should have written them down ) but was really good. Although she didn’t call him “Master” in the end (as per their conversation ) but hopefully it’ll be in the next chapter . That is if you’re making one more .

Thanks for the quick update too . Hope to see the next one just a quick .

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Oh here, let me fix the "master" bit

Awesome job, dude!

Amazing job my friend. Keep up the good work.

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I’m surprised you didn’t add the name of there daughter Crystal Gem and the proposal oh well good ending though

U know, this could be a running gag every time a human can to Equestria and call them hairless monkey/ape. But I like the monkey.

Is there a story with spike and rarity on the beach with spike putting sunscreen lotion on rarity and they end up having sex?

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Probably.

Spike went ahead and committed #NeccRope

10447209
no, he's still alive.

10447295
I know, it was a joke.

10447307
oh. Well, with all due respect, let's not make suicide jokes. I'm extremely against it

10447309
I will respect your wishes, I am sorry...

10447209
Not funny.

10464449
I realize that, jeez...

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Just saying.

10464486
I already warned him, no need to worry

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Okay