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I'm pretty sure this is a prequel, not a sequel.
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I know. I should fix this, and have it linked to it.
A sad beginning, knowing how he lost eveything he used to love. Sad. Reminds me of what happened to Berry Punch in my story.
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I know. It's going to be a sad story, and the ending will have Abacus running away from Hoofstrong Prison Center after his release that'll tie into the main story.
The dark, horrific, rape and torture stuff doesn't start until chapter two. The first chapter is going to be in parts.
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Okay. If you wondering what I meant with Berry, I had made it that her husband was a unicorn, teleporting her out of their burning house moments before it collasped to save his unbirth child (Ruby). He survived but died later in the hospital. His death was what caused Berry to be so overprotective over Ruby
I'm glad this story is finally out.
This looks like an interesting story so far, I will be looking forward to see more.
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Just thought it could interest you why I mentioned.
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Awesome. I'm writing the next chapter (or next part of chapter one) as we speak.
BTW Thank you for adding this story, and "A Pop Star, a Princess, and a Prisoner" to your favorites. And for the follow.
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You should link me the story so I can check it out.
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If you like and have the time you can give my other stories also a try
Okay, here. I hope you like and looking forward your comments
When is this story going to continue?
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As soon as I finish the Star Wars/MLP: The Movie sequels.
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Okay. Just wanted to know
My condulences, its Never Easy. Derpy and derpy? I Think you Made a mistake here
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What mistake did Derpy make?
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You wrote Derpy and derpy. Two derpy?
And by the Way, would you like if i give Abacus a camo in One of my Stories?
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Huh! I did? Where did I do that?
Also, sure. You may. Which story though?
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And for the camo, i tell that in the pm i sent you
So far it's interesting, I am very much look forward to see the next chapter to story, looks fun so far.
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Thank you.
Just to let you know, reading A Pop Star, a Princess, and a Prisoner, the story it's a prequel to, is highly recommended before reading this. Because this prequel contains spoilers to the first story. If you already read it, that's okay. You won't be spoiled by anything.
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BTW Did you notice any references in this new chapter of this story?
The First casulty is Truth.
And i didn't Wanted to bother you with the pm, i was just Thinking out loud and kinda curious what you Think about Abacus Meeting His counterpart
Nice
Wow. It's getting good now.
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True, but don't forget that Abacus was framed by Blue Ward and Cover-Up, and their secret corruption ring they have with Hoofstrong Prison Center.
As for Abacus's reaction to meeting his counterpart, I don't really know. I think he would be confused, and be doing a lot of processing. Not to mention he would probably also be having flashbacks of what happened to Tiger Lily, and the horrible, humiliating tortures he suffered at Hoofstrong.
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Thank you.
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This is just the start.
The real good fun begins in chapter 2, where Abacus arrives at Hoofstrong Prison Center. And if you read A Pop Star, a Princess, and a Prisoner (thanks for the favourite BTW), you know what that means.
BTW What chapter of A Pop Star, a Princess, and a Prisoner are you up to?
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I read it already a while ago. I just didn't have an account then. I also didn't know you wrote a second one till today.
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I see. Well, I should tell you that I am recently making some further changes, as well as correcting mistakes in A Pop Star, a Princess, and a Prisoner. And I've also posted the character designs of some of the characters in the story on Deviantart.
https://raptormon132.deviantart.com/gallery/66334687/MLP-A-Pop-Star-a-Princess-and-a-Prisoner
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I heard that. Well when I have time I will reread it. Also I will take a look at some of the design
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The designs are great. Nice work on them
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Thank you. I even wrote a blog about some of the other characters some time ago, if you didn't see it. Just so you know, the other characters are only mentioned, and have images and references to their designs. Here's the link to it.
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/755366/a-pop-star-a-princess-and-a-prisoner-character-designs-and-inspirations-to-them
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Yeah. You see, my idea was that Abacus exists also in Patch's Universe, Meeting his counterpart as he saves His Child.
Poor Abacus...
. Why did Tiger Lily have to die...?
Oh crap
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I know. I feel the same, and I wrote it this way.
Unfortunately, as you know from the previous main story, this Tiger Lily's tragic death is merely a foreshadowing of the horrors that are soon to await him.
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"Oh crap!" indeed.
Also, the police pony that arrests Abacus, Hard Case is a character from the MLP comic series.
vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/mlp/images/e/ec/Friends_Forever_issue_14_Hard_Case.png/revision/latest?cb=20150304221057
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BTW I should also tell you that I'm doing some editing and further changes to the main story, "A Pop Star, a Princess, and a Prisoner".
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I just know I'm not gonna like what I find...
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Okay, thanks for letting me know
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And you remember reading a glimpse of what he went through in the original story, but in this story, nothing is going to be toned down.
Yup.
When I begin that chapter (As Anakin Skywalker said):
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Oh shit...
Why the f**k is this story so disliked?
This story is pretty decent, it's just a bit unpolished but that still should yield at least 75% upvotes.
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The reason for that is because someone told me that rape fic stories are frowned upon, even though the rape and torture in this story hasn't started yet.
Also, If you're new to this story, I would highly recommend for you to read "A Pop Star, a Princess, and a Prisoner" first before this one, because it this story is a prequel story, and has spoilers to the first story. Unless if you don't mind spoilers. It's up to you.
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You know what is funny to me? How rape fic gets most frowned upon but yet get a lot views.
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I caught that. I read that comic, so I knew who he was.
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That's awesome.
I felt that he would be a great, but brief, cameo to the story, since he is an arrogant, aggressive bastard in the comics, and since he's in Fillydelphia as well, I thought it was fitting that he would be the one to arrest Abacus, and have him extradited to Ponyville.
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And it does.
I don't mean to sound like a rusher or pusher or anything but is this story going to continue?