Too Much Pi

It's Pi Day, and the Mane Six are celebrating. And by the end of it, everypony is completely fed up with pi. Even Twilight. Also, Rainbow doesn't understand how to find the area of a circle, and everypony has actually been spelling Pinkie's name wrong their entire lives.
Sounds fun, huh?

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DeskManiac

DeskManiac #1 · Mar 15th, 2017 · · ·

I'm just surprised Twilight doesn't know the origins of pi. Being such a huge science freak, not to mention the number of history books she has, it's really impossible she doesn't know (Come on even I know).

Also, 4th paragraph, "The alciorn glared at her and huffed." Alicorn is spelled alciorn.

Generally, I wouldn't say I liked it, or hated it. It was a nice read to pass the time. But it really didn't make me laugh or anything.

I hope u get more helpful comments from others as well. I wouldn't say my comment was very helpful, but I hope you can gain something from it anyway.

nebulaegalaxy

nebulaegalaxy #2 · Mar 15th, 2017 · · ·

AJtheRaven

AJtheRaven #3 · Mar 15th, 2017 · · ·

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Thanks for the comment. I understand what you are saying and added a couple lines to the story. I see your point... twilight probably knows erything about pi... but then again, I needed that whole scenario to happen because it was part of the plot, so. Guess an author can't have it all. ;) also, I fixed the spelling. Thanks.
I did gain something from your comment, don't worry;)

AJtheRaven

AJtheRaven #4 · Mar 15th, 2017 · 1 · ·

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nebulaegalaxy

nebulaegalaxy #5 · Mar 15th, 2017 · · ·

8024132 Shame Rainbow slammed the door on AJ
Apple pie is awesome

AJtheRaven

AJtheRaven #6 · Mar 15th, 2017 · 2 · ·

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I know right?! It's actually one of my favorite desserts. And I love applejack. So I felt really guilty writing that scene. But hopefully it was at least comedic. ;)

BoringChaos