I'll look at it and track it for now, but that doesn't I have to like it. But it is your story after all. None of the less, I hope your story gets likes.

I already love it! Hope you update it soon

Huge mistake on his part for not making sure Mare Do Well is actually dead. Just because she doesn't move doesn't mean she is dead

8024987 i think he left her alive on purpose , she has no powers so it only makes sense shes wearing kevlar

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i don't think he's a real villain he wanted to be a hero but got rejected so he made himself be the villain to make the hero's look better and to get closer to them even if it's in a bad way attention is attention
but if he really was a true evil villain he would have just shot the father, daughter and mare do well which he did not.

Nice,
I eagerly await the next update.

"All these words, words like 'evil' and 'vicious', they meant nothing to nature. Yes, evil was a human invention."
--Wolf Lord Eric Longtooth

In this fic can the guy with the magnum win

ha, I like it already

Whelp, to hell with this.

Looks promising. Maybe add a little torture and you'll make the most evil son of a bitch in this site.

more please

Is this story dead

Please continue