Hi, name's Marvin.
Well, it was my name back home. Nobody has called me that in a long time now.
When I got invited for the next RPC, I got really excited. Though something, that I wouldn't have dreamt of happened to me. You see, I met this rather odd fellow, who called himself "The Merchant". He said he could help me to perfect my costume and I actually bought something from him.
Not exactly my brightest Idea.
Anyway now I am stuck in a land of anthromorphical horse-people.
In this strange new world I'm now known as Skeith, Terror of Death, the Shadow..., let's say I go by a few names.
While I tried to work out what happened to me, I fought quite a few Villains, though I never killed anyone.
Why then am I so feared by this worlds Inhabitants, you may ask. The answer is simple. After all my powers corrupt quite easilywhich let's me tend to lose control. It's like playing a non-lethal version of russian roulette.
After I conceded to imprisonement, to protect the people of this land, I simply waited. But soon I will walk these lands once again.
Seeing as this is my first time trying anything creative in years, I will appreciate any criticism you have.
Please comment on what you think about this story.
Meh, it was nice.
Spelling flubs here and there, and though English (American, not the Queen's) is my main language, I would not be able to rhyme my way out of a paper bag.
Good Job!
Can't wait to read more.
I like this, hope it continues.
Uh no.
*Notices the last updated date* Hisssss.... Not gonna start another fic unless this is updated soon.
Good so far hope you continue it๐
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I wouldn't expect any updates anytime soon, or at all really, it's been three years.