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Ponyess
I just recently started to write stories directly towards the FiM actively, though I have been writing for years, publishing numerous stories at Mibba and the eventual pony story, as far as to the MLP
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In the synopsis, why is only the word "settlement" pink?
Why didn't you respond to my comment?
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This was intended for the more advanced readers.
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Sorry, I was considering how to word the response, then the story slipped of the screen and I forgot the comment.
Ps: I hope this makes sense.
Interesting take on stable life.
But how can thid new Starlight know that the other stables ain't doing so well? Isn't this one isolated?
Where did the bomb go off?
It was close enough to tax Starlight shield to the point of exhausting her, but not close enough to damage her tent?
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01. Narrative
02. Stable Tech support
03. Pink intervention by what means she may choose
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out of direct sight.
The tent is within the shield, and she has already been trecking for a while ..
Hum interesting so far keep it.
I read seven chapters and it didn't really picked up my attention. Had to drop it because for some reason I didn't really care what happens to the characters in the story.
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While I may have an idea or tow as to how to improve the story, I would still appreciate your point in the matter.
Are the chapters too short, and the characters poorly devgeloped or tied into the story? While I could edit and develop these past chapters, that is still too late for you?
I hope I can make the characters intrweresting and engaging enough to invest in and care what happens to them.
Since the lay of the land is largely established, I will move the focus towards the main characters promised up front.
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Oh, I will. Thank you.
I am still working on the story, hoping you still enjoy where this is going.
Interesting take on Ministry Ponk.