Trying To Raise The Dead

Spike poisons Rarity and he takes it way too far by trying to revive her.

Chapters (4)

Trying to revive Rarity · 5th Jan 2017 · 613 words
613
Download .txt
Download .html
Prisoned in the Cemetary House · 5th Jan 2017 · 458 words
458
Download .txt
Download .html
Bringing Rarity back as a demon · 5th Jan 2017 · 977 words
977
Download .txt
Download .html
The graves · 5th Jan 2017 · 162 words
162
Download .txt
Download .html

Comments ( 3 )

Viewing 1 - 50 of 3
- Newest First
- Oldest First

Cloudy95

Cloudy95 #1 · Jan 5th, 2017 · · · The graves ·

................ ok. What the fuck have I just read? *sigh* OK. Say it's a trollfic, and I'll shut up. But if this is supposed to be taken seriously and not as a trollfic... Then I'm gonna speak my mind.

Gremory

Gremory #2 · Jan 10th, 2017 · 2 · · The graves ·

I couldn't pass from half of the first chapter, and I tried.

Characters seems oddly out of character, and it has the special accomplishment of showing with just a line for each.

The situation is really bizarre, we're thrown into it without any explanations, and the quality makes me think we will never get one. What is trixie and sunset doing there? Even if theres an explanation later, I don't feel we'll get a good one.

Try going for smaller, simpler stuff. Nice try, but it didn't work. Try again and as many times as its needed. Keep up, you can do it.

Viewing 1 - 50 of 3
- Newest First
- Oldest First

CAPTAIN YOSHI HD

Featured In7

Stats

FIMFiction

Follow & Support Us

CAPTAIN YOSHI HD

Also LikedSimilarAuthor

Featured In7

Stats

FIMFiction

Follow & Support Us

Also Liked Similar Author