Many hands make light work. Many hearts make light burdens.
Hearth's Warming eve is two days away, and Donut Joe is preparing something special. But when things take an unexpected turn, he realizes his hooves aren't going to be enough on their own.
Luckily, an unwitting volunteer stumbles into Joe's life.
Much to his frustration.
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Fantastic!
I have to say, this story just happened to catch my eye in the feed, though it sounded somewhat trivial, so I didn't expect much. But you admittedly blew me away! Just goes to show that you should always give stories a chance.
Very good concept, very well-paced, slightly confusing at some parts, such as the middle with the Infiltrator, Double-Time crying, and the next scene just silently following Joe, but still, those were minor problems, nothing too serious. I didn't spot any noticeable errors in grammar or spelling, so good job on that as well. That ending, tho.... mind blown.
Interesting headcannon.
All in all, an excellent story, a fun read. Well done!
7833141 Wow! Um, thank you!
Admittedly, I wasn't expecting that kind of reaction from... well, anyone really.
It touches my heart that you so thoroughly enjoyed my story.
Thank you, Wyngs Triumphant.
-Ru
7833401 Trust me, in a feed full of clop and edgy dark stories, something as simple, but well-done like this is a miracle to someone like me :)
7833745 Happy to be of service.
-Ru
Ohh, it's this again! I just loved this little story, alot of holiday spirit, a bit of action, and so much joy!
The characters were wonderful, and adorable!
Thank you for this wonderful present (Even if it was last year's it's totally worth it this year as well!)
7836894 You're welcome!
-Ru
I can say nothing other than this story was AMAZING. It kept me interested throughout, and I definitely loved the characters!
Like I said I can't put it into words how much I loved this story! Great work!
8003834 So glad you enjoyed it!
-Ru
There are a couple times where you put "Cashier" where I think you might have meant "Cash register". The cashier is the person who operates the device.
That ending though.
8143760 I did?
Huh.
Thanls for pointing that out, Zyrian.
-Ru
8143760 I think I got them all.
Thanks again.
-Ru
8143879
No problem
loved the ending. xD tricky lil' devil that joe.
aand i cried, when she said she didn't want to leave
don't want to go
8468205 Glad you liked it.
And thanks for the fave!
-Ru
This was a very good story.
My shipping detector's ticking
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Oh? And who’s sailing on this ship, I wonder?~
-Rub