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FallBlau


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Starlight rushes to get Twilight a last-minute gift before Hearth's Warming.

Special thanks to OnionPie for his help and advice.

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I like the story! But, you forgot to indent the paragraphs. I don't know if its just the style or you forgot :derpytongue2:

Merry x-mas!

7816589 Haha, thank you for pointing that out! I had indented them originally, but I forget that Fimfiction doesn't transfer over well sometimes. lol

Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Oh my god the love in this story! 1000/10 plus a like and a favorite!

7816719 From the bottom of my heart, that means so much to me. Thank you. :)

I don't know why the thought of Vinyl Scratch hosting a classical music radio station amuses me so much. Maybe it's the thought of her bopping her head away to it as if she was at a rock concert. And Button Mash's cameo is cute.

You also have a very cute ending.

But what do you mean by the "cyclop's hair hand"?

7816740 hairy - my bad. I'll fix that.

And thank you. My friends were also greatly amused by Vinyl's Profession, but hey, hard-times for DJ and Tavi is connected to this crowd, Vinyl can take what she can where she can. :p

She whisked her hooves back and forth, imagining she were in a waltz.

I like the mental image of her doing this under the covers.
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7816723 no problem! Merry Christmas!

7816825 Haha! That's a cute gif. ^^

That last little bit earned the fav from me.

A good example of not shoving the pairing down our throats the whole story. One almost forgets about the subtle hint of affection at the beginning and the journey becomes the focus. Only thing I think could add to it is if she did get around to mentioning she had tried to get her a gift only for Twilight to mention a letter from a certain mother and child and Twilight saying she had already gotten her a great gift, or something cheesey like that:derpytongue2:

Starlight and Spike stood outside Books-A-Gazillion in the Canterlot Mall, gazing inside at the object they desired. It was a stout, leather-bound book with gold trim around the seams and inlaid page with a neatly folded price tag by the brass book-holder that held it.

Do you happen to live in Muncie Indiana too? Cause there's a store called Books a Million at our mall. Or is it just a coincidence?

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I do not, but there are lots of Books a Millions all over. They're one of my favorite stores. ^^

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