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KillerChainsaw


I don't often write, but when I do it normally involves drama and/or NSFW content ;P

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This story is a sequel to Among The Pegasi


This story is a sequel to another fic of mine called, 'Among The Pegasi', so I recommend you go and read that story, before reading this one just so that you will be upto speed on everything that has happened so far.

Weeks after the news of Princess Twilight's relationship with former Cloudsdale resident Rainbow Dash was revealed things have relatively calmed down in Ponyville and its citizens have gotten pretty much used to seeing the cyan pegasus with the Princess now. However the same can't be said about the city above, as the pegasi from Cloudsdale haven't taken as well to the news as the town below them has.

And as Twilight plans to go forward with her idea of bringing the two feuding towns to an agreement, and somehow look to a future where they can all get along a bit better. A mystery pegasus from Cloudsdale comes to the Princess and Rainbow Dash, telling them that they also want there to be nothing but peace between the floating city above and the little town below. But could that be all that they are really after, or are they possibly hiding some other intentions?

Cover art by:

xPesifeindx

Chapters (25)
Comments ( 42 )

8370389
Weee! Indeed! :pinkiehappy:

Thank you for reading. :twilightsmile:

KillerChainsaw ;)

8372311
More coming very soon. :raritywink:

Thank you for reading. :twilightsmile:

KillerChinsaw ;)

8371890
Hoping that means that you enjoyed it.

Thank you for reading. :twilightsmile:

KillerChainsaw ;)

8372705
jeah, more twidash is always good :P

Moar. I demand even Moar.

8376278
Plenty more to come soon. :raritywink:

Thank you for reading. :twilightsmile:

KillerChainsaw ;)

Sounds interesting...

8389177
I can assure you that it will be. :raritywink:

And thank you for reading. :twilightsmile:

KillerChainsaw ;)

8389183
Hope you will enjoy all that's to come. :twilightsmile:

KillerChainsaw ;)

8408856
I fixed the spelling, thank you for pointing that out, or did I use the wrong word?

Thank you for reading by the way. :twilightsmile:

KillerChainsaw ;)

Oh...so Lightning Dust is a good character. I thought she‘s secretly a villain or something...isn‘t she? Okay now I‘m confused lol

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The thing with Lightning Dust, is she's a bit of a mystery who seems pretty much almost perfect, in fact you could say she's in fact too perfect. You'll just have to wait and see with her I'm afraid. :raritywink:

Thank you ever so much for reading. :twilightsmile:

KillerChainsaw ;)

OH SNAP! Someone's gone and messed with the wrong pony! :rainbowdetermined2:

8479266
Dash is angry and ready for some sweet justice. :rainbowdetermined2:
Thank you for reading by the way. :twilightsmile:

KillerChainsaw ;)

Why am I suddenly getting a bad feeling.

8487401
Because things are now starting to get...interesting maybe? :pinkiesmile:
Thank you for reading by the way. :twilightsmile:

KillerChainsaw ;)

Again; why is it I have a bad feeling about this. Like something is itching in the back of my mind.

8513290
Maybe you will just have to wait and see, and then perhaps you will get your answer after future chapters come out. :raritywink:
Thank you for reading by the way. :twilightsmile:

KillerChainsaw ;)

And now Lightning starts to show her true colours.

And of course, this is where it all begins.

8579544
Yep!
Thank you for reading by the way. :twilightsmile:

KillerChainsaw ;)

And now it's starting to make senses. Keep it up.

8597601
Will do and thank you for reading as always by the way. :twilightsmile:

KillerChainsaw ;)

And at this point Twilight comes in, having followed Rainbow anyway, mabe even with Celestia in tow, and they are all f***** seven ways to hell.

8615803
No spoilers now. :rainbowlaugh:

Thank you for reading by the way. :twilightsmile:

KillerChainsaw ;)

I hate it when I'm right.

Still not asking for help... Is this supposed to be a 'heat of the moment' kind of thing or are they purposfully being retarded? Celestia is just one quick letter away...

8650879
They are going to ask for help, but just not yet, they first need to make sure that Dash is okay. (they will write her a letter at the start of the next chapter just so you know)
Thank you for reading by the way. :twilightsmile:

KillerChainsaw ;)

I’m looking forward to it:twilightsmile:

8831196
Glad to hear it, and thank you for reading by the way. :twilightsmile:

KillerChainsaw ;)

And another demonization of Lightning Dust.

8852853
Well I wouldn't call her a demon, but she's definitely a manipulative pony in this story.

Thank you for reading by the way. :twilightsmile:

KillerChainsaw ;)

8853088
It just doesn´t fit to a sympathetic character like Dusty.
Wind Rider would have been a much better choice.

8853125
Well actually Lightning Dust is a completely different character in this story since this is an AU, and she is nothing like the Lightning Dust from the actual show just so you know.

KillerChainsaw ;)

Please for the sake of future readers, go back and edit your story. There's spelling errors and run on sentences everywhere.

I really liked the story and thought the concept was interesting but you really need to go back and edit out all the spelling errors. Not to mention all the run on sentences, and maybe clean up some dialog so it doesn't feel forced. You could also work on making sure the characters speak as they would in the show.

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