It's been a thousand years since Discord broke free, defeated the Elements of Harmony and trapped them and the royal sisters in stone. He's been free to spread his chaos throughout the world unchecked. One day however he feels something strange, something he's never felt before in the time he's tortured the world....bordeom
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I reed it, now gonna cry about Discord
Two views, three votes?...
'short. Reading.
It's good, but I feel like more could've been said.
The Doctor would be proud of this. This is absolutely brilliant.
But...that's it? This would have been a fantastic beginning to something much longer. Either way, it's always nice to get inside Discord's head a bit.
Kinda short, but a good idea in the whole "He wept for there were no more worlds to conquer," kind of thing.
> began to doze of, not hearing the sound of stone cracking before me...
Ooops. But interesting anyway.
Interesting concept, liked and faved. Could've mentioned other major characters that would have stayed:
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It was good, I liked the idea, but it should be lengthened, like what happens after the elements and the sisters break free.
you should continue
Interesting.
Ah, ennui, the bane of every villain. Would love to see more!
infecting water with fire? a possible aqua teen hunger force reference?
anywho, great story, i assume the harmony within the presence of the alicorn statues will free them in much the same way that the dis harmony within the presence of the draconequus freed him.
848515 To answer you specifically, yeah its a reference, thought it'd be funny though. To answer address everyone else I really just wanted this to be a short story, I didn't intend for it to be 'this' short but that's just how I write and as for continuing...I'll think about it
This was alright, definitely interesting, and definitely original, but too short. Your grammar needs work, but the story itself is fine; it just needs more in general.
Does it really need to be furthered? I thought it would be a perfect one-shot story.
Discord...
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I had an idea once like this. Only Discord removed or trapped the elements and princesses and ruled for a few millennia before getting similarly bored, backed up time (or maybe he had time randomly reversing the whole while so no time had passed anyway, seems his style) put them all back into place, "pressed play", then allowed the defeat we saw. Just seems to me that he was too powerful and clever to be beaten the way he was... But yeah, it's good to see a similar idea done so well. You portrayed his internal monologue far better than I could have.
Thanks for the great read and keep it up! 
Thumbs-up. (Lots and lots of grammar problems, though.)