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Shimmer Shy


"I know. And counting on my own experiences, they'll forgive you." ~Sunset Shimmer :heart: SunLight FriendShipper. Sorry guys, I'm not going to be active here anymore!

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With Pinkie staying over on the night before Christmas, Sunset has no idea how the night's going to go. Apparently, Pinkie has plans of playing outside in the snow...at midnight.


Sorry that it's so random. :rainbowlaugh: I've been feeling very random lately. :pinkiecrazy:


Cover art made by me with PowerPoint.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 12 )

Oh, Pinkie. So unexplainable, yet still so wonderful. :pinkiesmile:
This was a cute little random fic! I liked it. In a few places, the sentences could've been smoother, and there were some spots where a more fitting word could've been substituted, but overall, I liked it. Nice work, my friend!

7824391 Thanks! And yeah, I could tell reading through it that there were some rocky parts, I just couldn't seem to find a way to fix them. I hope to improve in my future stories, though. :scootangel:

7824452 Thanks so much!!! :pinkiehappy::heart:

Do you have any friends also in the fandom? If so, I find having them proofread for you is really helpful. This is another person on the sevenbubbles1000 account by the way. Its a shared account. We both proofread each other's stuff and I have found it very helpful.

7825254 Yeah, actually. Thanks for the advice! It'll definitely come in handy for next time! :twilightsmile:

7828597 Thanks so much! :scootangel:

All just a dream...or was it?

Cute little story.

That was some silly snowy fun

Sunset let out a sigh as she turned back to Pinkie, who was flickering a flashlight pointed directly into her eyes on and off. "Alright, Pinkie," she said, "you can stay. Just don't keep me up too late. Please. "

Wow, I can't believe that sunset is allowing pinkie pie to stay over on Christmas Eve and not even ask her why she doesn't want to spend Christmas with her family. :pinkiegasp:

Finally, Sunset flung open the curtains to see Pinkie standing in the front yard with her arms outstretched at her sides and her head facing straight to the sky. Tiny snowflakes drifted into her hair and her open mouth, but all she wore was her pajamas. Sunset sighed in exasperation, slipping on her leather jacket and a pair of slippers. What is wrong with that girl? she thought to herself as she opened the heavy wooden door.

Really pinkie, aren't you freezing!!! 😐P

Pinkie was smirking. " That's how." Sunset stared at her blankly, so she explained, "You can't be cold if you aren't thinking about being cold. Just like how you forget you're tired when you're too busy shouting at your friend."

That doesn't make sense. :ajbemused:

"Ho, ho, ho! Merry Christmas!" Sunset snapped her head to look at the sky just in time to watch a sleigh pass overhead. Someone inside waved down at her. "I trust you've been a good girl this year, Sunset Shimmer?"

Wasn't expecting to see Mr. C make a appearance. :applejackunsure:

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